Oh gosh

Subject: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:50 pm

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This is horrible. xD I was trying to draw a human woman (I found a photograph of one) and it ended up looking weird, especially the face. Can anyone give some critiques for this? I don't know what to fix but one of the eyes and nose, but that is just about it to me.

Subject: Re: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 7:56 pm

9.5/10
You can kind of see the head base..that's it. Smile

Subject: Re: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 8:11 pm

xD Thank you. Yeah I need to fix that... really.

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It's pretty good. :3
The outline of the eyes are a little too dark though. The nose's shape is awkward, & the bottom lip is a bit uneven. The neck is a little too thick, in my opinion. That's all I see, pretty much.
I'd give it an 8;
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8/10
This is superb.
All though the base of the head is still noticeable and the lips are not the same on the right side. The nostrils are a bit wide (Unless you were heading for that.) and the fist isn't correctly proportioned.

You really improved though! You should make a shop. I love your drawings, keep making more!

Subject: Re: Oh gosh Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:01 pm

Thank you guys. Yeah I kind of just need to fix the head and fist for what I know. xD

(I really thought this was bad for some reason, ehh)

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