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sherley739 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757 Join date : 2011-07-23 Age : 25 Location : district 12, panem
| Subject: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:13 pm | |
| hey everyone. its been a while since i posted artwork. First ill tell you a bit about her, because she is a character for my manga. When you comment tell me if you imagined her as i drew her or you imagined her differently.Media used:color pencil,prisma pen,my beloved eraser,and pencil.thank you for your time. Also, When you comment please include any critque and if it fits the description the way you imagined.Name: Ellie mori Age:19 Sex; female eyes: purple Hair: unruly,curly/straight,blond hobby:art weapon: nature personality: ellie is a very kind and caring person. you can uually find her outdoors surrounded by nature and drawing landscapes traits: - kind -artisitc -shy -dislikes violence and only hurts others to protect someone and for a good reason. outfit: barefoot, and in a long flowy blue,green,yellow dress extra: loves butterflys here she is
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foreveran Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3906 Join date : 2010-08-26 Age : 29 Location : SKY :p
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:19 pm | |
| 9/10 amazing especially the dress | |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:21 pm | |
| This is outstanding. I love how you colored the dress & how you drew the hair. (:
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Zelda Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 773 Join date : 2011-10-25 Age : 23 Location : skyrim
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sat Nov 26, 2011 11:24 pm | |
| 9.5/10 Love the dress and the hair!!! The only things that bug me are the feet and stomach. The feet/toes look a bit abnormal and the stomach is pretty skinny and long. Other than those, love it! I think it fits the description perfectly c: | |
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sherley739 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757 Join date : 2011-07-23 Age : 25 Location : district 12, panem
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 12:14 am | |
| - Katieawesome56 wrote:
- 9.5/10 Love the dress and the hair!!!
The only things that bug me are the feet and stomach. The feet/toes look a bit abnormal and the stomach is pretty skinny and long. Other than those, love it! I think it fits the description perfectly c: thanks for the critique, ill try to improve on that. feet are kinda my weakness.... | |
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Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 12:19 am | |
| My goodness. This is absolutely beautiful. 9/10. I'm gonna give you the whole sha-bang here... lol
But a couple things, the hair. It is pretty, but I advise to make it more flow-y looking if it's flowing in the wind. You have the direction correct, but, I don't know it looks kind of stiff to me. And about the arm that is up by her face, the elbow is too pointy and the the folding up part of the arm looks a bit too skinny. Just bend your arm like that and take a look how it looks like; you'll understand what I'm saying.
I really like how you drew her legs and feet though. And omg, especially the ankles. You drew the collar bone, shoulder and neck very nice. Her face looks flawless and the bangs are perfect. The dress was beautifully drawn and has a nice flow to it. It does fit the description very well.
Well done. (: | |
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sherley739 Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 757 Join date : 2011-07-23 Age : 25 Location : district 12, panem
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 12:24 am | |
| - Crownie wrote:
- My goodness. This is absolutely beautiful.
9/10. I'm gonna give you the whole sha-bang here... lol
But a couple things, the hair. It is pretty, but I advise to make it more flow-y looking if it's flowing in the wind. You have the direction correct, but, I don't know it looks kind of stiff to me. And about the arm that is up by her face, the elbow is too pointy and the the folding up part of the arm looks a bit too skinny. Just bend your arm like that and take a look how it looks like; you'll understand what I'm saying.
I really like how you drew her legs and feet though. And omg, especially the ankles. You drew the collar bone, shoulder and neck very nice. Her face looks flawless and the bangs are perfect. The dress was beautifully drawn and has a nice flow to it. It does fit the description very well.
Well done. (: ahhhhh! for some reason i thought you quit fantage forum. yayaya! anyways back on topic, how would i make her hair more flowy? i wouldnt want to many stray hair peices because then it would look wiered. i get the elbow part though. thanks a bunch. | |
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Crownie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1010 Join date : 2011-09-11 Age : 28 Location : In the center of the sun.
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 12:29 am | |
| Haha, naw. Just took a little break. &about the hair flowy, I don't know how to explain, but it's not major (: no prob. | |
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Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:21 am | |
| Oh it's gorgeous. I absolutely love it.
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:28 am | |
| It is beautiful; only the feet look a bit strange. You can fix that 9/10 | |
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taehyung Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3089 Join date : 2011-07-15 Age : 23 Location : somewhere
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 8:44 am | |
| Critique time - Spoiler:
- Mistakes:
1}Why there are 6 fingers?and pointy?is it a knife to kill other ppl? lawl just kidding 2}is it awkward that it's long and thin?and the butt becomes big? 3}the hand its awkward like the thumb is long .... etc 4}the feet are weird!really a circle! 5}Should the hair flow more cause the dress is flowing and the hair should!
1 mistake = -0.5 2 mistakes = -1 Overall Mark 7.5/10 But it's the best drawing I've ever seen in the forum! So 8.5/10 | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 25 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:04 am | |
| The waist, hands, feet, and butterflies look a bit funny, but it's amazing. Expescially the eye :OO | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:08 am | |
| It's beautiful! 9/10. I absolutely love it. Though her waist/hips look a little bit odd and have lost form. | |
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ashley123 Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1934 Join date : 2010-01-27 Age : 111
| Subject: Re: Ellie...rate 1-10 and critique please <3 Sun Nov 27, 2011 11:09 am | |
| I love that! Its amazinng!!
The feet looks kinda odd, but other than that, its really good! | |
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