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| Subject: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:12 am | |
| - WELCOME:
to , Guest. Have a jolly time here, but be sure to take your equipment!
- introducing Selivia Watson:
Selivia, the head of her ghastly gang 'the cool club' which she made, is particularly the center of attention, or the most popular girl in Austria High School. She loves the computer, is exceptionally good in science but mostly a nature-hater. She also despises her number one enemy, Cornilia Seldon who she thinks isn't clever at all.
- Pansy Wilters:
Pansy is Selly's bestie. She always agrees with Selivia, even if she's wrong. Pansy is a super star at music. She boasts about her talent and fame. She's very jealous of Olivia Wishes because she's good at everything.
- Sabrina Merms:
Sabrina completes the cool club. She's the bossiest personality you could imagine! Dear, dear, she's horrible at spelling- but she IS loyal to her friends, that is, the cool club.
- Olivia Wishes:
Olivia and Connie are best friends. Olivia is super good at everything, math, english, P.E, you name it. She's the class topper. However, she isn't a fan of exploring places; she's a bit too timid. She's got a load of freckles.
- Cornilia Seldon:
She's the star of this show! How could you not read this? She's a bit clumsy. She has a pet Sniffles who she admires. She loves animals! Connie is good at exploring, she's the bravest person you would see.
- Chapter 1:
" Oh, Hurry up, Connie! Or we'll be late for school!" Olivia said, dragging Cornilia to school. "But Cookie, those 'lil hamsters look so sweet!" Cornilia replied, pressing her nose to the hamster's cage glass. "CORNILIA SELDON! If you don't hurry up, I shan't wait for you." said Cookie sharply. Olivia is Connie's best friend. You can't judge her by her size; she's smarter than two elephants put together. She is intelligent and many people obey her. "Ah..look at the goody-goody teacher's pet! And look at the animal-maniac next to her!" Sabrina, Pansy and Selivia giggled. "Shoo! SHOO I say! Sabrina, if you keep giggling with your stupid friends like this, your laugh will sound like chokes of pain over the years!" Olivia said wittily. "Aw you goody-goody, don't worry. We will tell the teacher that you both were busy dancing on the road." laughed Sabrina Merms. "We did NOT!" "Connie, it's no use fighting with them. Let's go." Connie and Cookie had a wonderful day at school. They aced the surprise maths quiz, while the others flunked. - "You topped me as usual!" laughed Cornilia, tickling Olivia in the cafetaria at lunch. "That's because I'm the smarty pants!" hollered Olivia. Suddenly, an announcement came on the loudspeaker. "All students of class ten? All students of class ten! Since we are living very close to Egypt, we will be going there for a field trip for three days on seventeenth of November. Please make sure you pack food, clothes, drinking water and equipment. It is free." "Seventeenth...that's just six days away!" jumped Connie, clapping her hands. They danced round the cafetaria. They were going to Egypt!
- chapter 2:
The day after, Cornilia got dressed for school. She couldn't help thinking about Egypt- that was where she was born..she couldn't control herself at lunch. "YIPPEE!" she shouted, jumping on a chair. "My, Cornilia! What's wrong with you today? You're acting hyperactive. Oh dear, I must've put too much sugar in last night's mil-" "Mom, we're going to Egypt for three days- for free!" she replied. "WHAT? But you can't stay at home for a solid MINUTE!" "MOM!" "Oh, sorry. I'm just pulling your leg. When are you going?" her mother, Amanda Seldon asked. "On seventeenth." said Connie. "That's four days away! OK, give me a list of things to buy." "Biscuits, buns, some books and notebooks to not bore me out, a torch, sugar cookies, cake, fruits and juice." she said happily. "Woah, that's a long list." smiled Amanda. "I'll go out and buy the stuff later. First, finish your breakfast and go to school!" At school, Miss Janes, their maths class teacher said she had a surprise for them. "Since you already have projects for science and english..." she said, smiling, "There will be no homework today, and this is a free period for you." "YAAAAAAAAAAAY!" the class screamed and hooted. "HOWEVER, the students who have scored less than 81 out of 90 in their math test will stay back AND study." she said, narrowing her eyebrows. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!" quarter of the class hollered. One of them was Selivia. So while the class cleared out, the people who scored less (including Connie) stayed back. "Don't worry Connie, we have a free period in English, too." Olivia said, winking at Connie. Cornilia sighed. "Well...it wouldn't be SO bad, as long as Miss Butches is taking this class." Miss Butches was the harshest, strictest teacher in the whole school. She was tall, bulky and quite fair and pretty. But underneath lay a steaming heart, ready to screech at anybody. At the back of the classroom, Pansy and Sabrina were in hysterics that Selly couldn't come down. ESPECIALLY Pansy, Selivia's best friend. "NO! Selly, when the teacher's not looking, sneak down to play with us. We'll try as good as we can to cover you!" they wailed. "Codswallop..." muttered Cookie and Connie together. "But good thing that Miss James is taking this class.." said Cornilia. Miss James was the english teacher of Connie and Cookie's class (10 D) and she was quite sweet, timid. Connie said she was JUST like Cookie. "No-you're just embarrassing me!" Cookie blushed, when Cornilia said that once to her. "Anyway- bye!" said Olivia, waving to her friend. Then she walked down the staircase.
- Chapter 3:
Cookie got to the grounds and sat down on a cut tree stump and watched the other children play. Then suddenly, Pansy and Sabrina came down and saw Cookie. They cackled. "Haha...Olicia Witches alone!" said Sabrina maliciously. "Oh hello, Soapina Burns!" said Cookie. She's quite good at snapping back. She has smart answers. "What's your problem?" she said again. "Why are you always picking on me and Cornilia?" "That's because you two are WIMPS, wimp. There's no one else to pick on. Oh bother, where's that permission slip?" said Soapina. "Permission slip!?" "It's for VIPS in school who get awesome grades" Pansy said. "All three of us have it!" "Uh...yeah. What's it for-" "Well, when we go to Egypt, we're the only people who are allowed into Tutankhamen's tomb. And we get to stay in an AC room, with comfy pillows." replied Pansy. "WHAAAT! But how'd you get it!? I've got WAY better grades than you!" "Codswallop..." muttered Soapy under her breath. "Well, you have to get it signed by a teacher- you have to ask them first." Pansy snickered. She loved taunting them. Suddenly, Connie came down. "Hey, guess what?" she panted. "Miss Butches took our class. We all had to stay, but then Silly Selly made a dash for it, and got caught. Miss Butches was so mad, she let everyone go down and made Silly study extra-hard and left her to rot in class...." "Hah, not so hot now, eh, Pantsy Wilweeds?" guffawed Cookie. They left in a huff. "Now we can play tag- you're it!" "NO YOU ARE!" They chased each other round the playground. "NUTBALL!" "NUTHEAD!" They laughed. After a fun-filled-free-period, Cookie asked Cornilia something. "Connie, d'you think The cool club are telling the truth?" "About what?" Cookie told Connie all about the slip. "I don't know. Maybe they're lying." But they weren't. In lunch, EVERY SINGLE girl and boy of class 10 D had got the slip. The rest of the classes, not many had got it. "Oh HEYYYY, Cookie and Connie!" said another friend of them, Clara Miltry. "Have you got the slip?" asked Olivia anxiously. "Yes. Everyone got it. Didn't you?" she replied. "NO! Connie, d'you know what this means?" "Yes..." They were the ONLY ONES WITHOUT THE SLIP!
- Chapter 4:
School was over. Everyone cleared out of Mrs.Janes' class. All except Cornilia and Olivia. They had to get the permission slip! "My, why are you still in class?" she asked them. "Miss, we need to get the permission slip-" began Cornilia. "You'll just mess this up!" whispered Olivia. "Miss Janes, it seems everyone in this class has got a permission slip...we want to get one too!" Cookie began. "Can you give one to each of us?" "Sorry, girls.." Miss Janes shook her head. "The last day of the slip give outs was yesterday. There aren't any left, and there isn't more time." "WHAT?!" They screamed. Unbelievable! They walked out of school, feeling gloomy. " Everyone got the permission slip except us!" said Connie, slapping her forehead. "I thought I heard about a permission slip day before yesterday, I was such a bonehead not to believe it." replied Cookie. "It's all my fault." "No it isn't. Oh well, at least our parents are letting us go..." sighed Connie. They walked back home. -----------------------------------------x-------------------------------------- Cookie lay on the bed, exhausted. Miss Butches had loaded them with homework. Normally, Cookie would finish piled of homework in a jiffy. She would never get tired. But now, for some reason she was. "Mom...I'm not feeling good..." she said at tea-time. "Why not?" asked her mother. She felt her head. "Oh my goodness, I think you're running a fever! I'll get a doctor." But it was much more than a fever-it was chicken pox. "CHICKEN POX?" screamed Cookie. "I MAY MISS THE FIELD TRIP!" "Yes, but you're contagious." said the doctor. "So stay here until the pox clear out." That night, Cookie called Connie on the phone. "Connie, I may not be able to come to the field trip. I have chicken pox..." said Cookie weakly. -----------------------------------------x-------------------------------------- Connie was busy doing her homework. She was still stuck on that third math sum, when she got a call from Olivia. "Connie, I may not be able to come to the field trip. I have chicken pox..." said Cookie weakly. "WHAT?" yelled Connie. "NO WAY!" "Yes way..." replied Cookie. "Alright, bye. My mom says I need to have some rest..." -CLICK-. Oh my goodness, Cookie having chicken pox? Unbelievable! She was one of those people who never fell ill! Oh no!
- Chapter 5 UNFINISHED:
The next day Olivia couldn't come to school; so Connie had to stand up for herself while the CC (Cool club) jeered at her. Connie flopped down on bed, tired from all the work.
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Winnowill Loyal Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:15 am | |
| I like the character descriptions! I'm excited to read this... | |
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 6:43 am | |
| Me 2! I'm sooooooooo Excited to read it! It look intersting | |
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Blue Veteran Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:09 am | |
| Woohoo! Guys, chapter one is out! I'll do two and three the next day (it's night in India)! | |
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Winnowill Loyal Fantagian
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 8:26 am | |
| That was brilliant! I love the dialogue! | |
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Nov 29, 2011 1:49 pm | |
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| Subject: Re: The Egyptian Tombs Tue Dec 06, 2011 9:18 am | |
| Thank you so much, guys! I'm looking for ideas for chapter five. Chapter 4 is out! Be sure to read it. Thanks for your support! :3 | |
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