Oliver Moderator
Posts : 4588 Join date : 2010-03-03 Age : 24 Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| Subject: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:08 pm | |
| so i've been drawing a ton on paint PAINT - Spoiler:
it's on paint so the colouring sucks, i'd like more critique on the lineart and tips on how to improve using tablets. critique whatever you want, though. thanks! | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:09 pm | |
| I really like your style. It's adorable. |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 25 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 12:09 pm | |
| That's really good. I love your art! =w= EDIT: What kind of tablet did you get?
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Toni Senior Fantagian
Posts : 342 Join date : 2011-07-14 Age : 28 Location : USA.
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 1:09 pm | |
| oh cool! thats really nice(:
i got a kindle fire a month ago for my birthday and i attempted to draw on it but i failed! | |
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Magdaleena Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2261 Join date : 2010-04-26 Age : 28 Location : Somewhere in northern Europe. Probably hours ahead of you.
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 3:05 pm | |
| You're lucky you got a working tablet. The one I got for Christmas last year started drawing before the pen actually hit the tablet. >_< Oh, and I know how to do aliased art in Windows 7 Paint, so you won't get those annoying white borders when you try to fill in. Here's how; You know that pencil tool? That's a binary tool. It's possible to change the size of it, so it works quite a lot like the paintbrush in old MS Paint. Then it's much easier to fill in, erase, edit, fix, etc. You know what I mean. Your style is adorable, too. Way better than what I managed to draw at your age. :) - Critique:
I'll give you a 9/10, because the arm looks kinda twisted, and the head is placed sorta wrong..? Unless that was your intention, that is. And it seems like there is too much shading behind that vest. And the hair shading looks kinda weird, maybe you should put some more strands there? Or maybe you could just forget them, and do regular cell shading, because it's kinda hard to shade hair properly in Paint.
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o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:32 pm | |
| The eyes and nose don't exactly follow the direction of the head. Other than that, well done for using a tablet. 9.5/10 | |
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pokeranger Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5454 Join date : 2010-01-29 Age : 25 Location : Loading...
| Subject: Re: i got a tablet for christmas Wed Dec 28, 2011 4:34 pm | |
| I may be wrong because I really do stink at giving criticism or critique, whatever you call it. The ears and eyes look a bit uneven. But I still love it. <3 | |
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