Moving To LA!

Subject: Re: Moving To LA! Wed Apr 28, 2010 7:09 am

Woah. I thought this was just a simple story about someone moving to L.A., but I was wrong!
Now I'm just dieing to know what happens next in chapter 7...
(That's why people say don't judge a book/story by it's cover/title.)

Subject: Re: Moving To LA! Wed Apr 28, 2010 8:41 am

Chapter six went a little bit too fast, but so exciting!

Subject: Re: Moving To LA! Wed Apr 28, 2010 1:51 pm

woww!! sooo scarryyy!! cant wait for next chap!!

Subject: Moving To la Wed May 12, 2010 8:07 pm

Chapter 7
As My car sped out twirling round and round. I Got scared. i heard one of the tires pop but i heard a gun shot. I Thought to myself " I Think he knows who we are" I Whispered To my mom and dad "Whats Going to happen to us?" They Whispered Back "I Called the police they are coming to help and Taya and Her Parents are in LA Waiting for us Then "BOOM BOOM BOOM!" "Oh My Gosh!"...........
"W-W-W-Whats ha-a-a-a-a-a-apening?" As I pass out my parents are scared to death. They were crying as i was asleep because i passed out..........
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Sorry the chapter was so short! And Dunh Dunh Duhhhh!

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Ooh, this is scary too!!!!

Write more! Write more!

Subject: Re: Moving To LA! Wed May 12, 2010 8:38 pm

its so awesome!!!!!!!

Subject: Re: Moving To LA! Thu May 13, 2010 11:36 am

ahh!! cant wait for next chapp!!!
soooo interesting!!!!!!!!!

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