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Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Lords Of Shadows Sun Mar 25, 2012 4:00 pm | |
| This is pretty weird but when I think of a title I think of a story... Anyway this story is called Lords of Shadows! I think I'll tell about the characters later.. I'm not finish though Characters: Alex Black- Shadow Lord 1 - Spoiler:
more coming soon SPOILER
Alex was opening the closet. He heard the sound of sorrow, sadness and pain. "You are one of the five lords..." whispered a ghost voice. Alex freaked out and closed his closet. He rushed to the living room and panted. Alex thought it was his imagination and went back to his room. opened the closet. A hand pulled him in....I'm working on the story so... Hope you enjoy it!Rate and critique? WOOHOO! I'm done! Here's the first chapter: Chapter 1- The Mysterious Sound- Spoiler:
One day around summer, Alex Black was in his house all day on the computer. He never spent the day outside spend- ing the nice, peaceful fresh air. The clock stroke six. "Oh, its dinner already?!" complained Alex. He stepped out of his bedroom and went to the dining table. There was nothing and no one there. "MOM!?" Alex hollered out. "Its NOT funny!!!" Alex's hands were trembling. He went back to his room hoping someone would tell him whats going on.
Alex heard something in his closet. He was hoping someone was inside. Alex was opening the closet. He heard the sound of sorrow, sadness and pain. "You are one of the five lords..." whispered a ghost voice. Alex freaked out and closed his closet. He rushed to the living room and panted.Alex thought it was his imagination and went back to his room. opened the closet. A hand pulled him in....
"W-w-whats going on? Mom, dad? Anyone? HELP!!" Said Alex shiver- ing. Alex appeared in a dark, blurry, purple room. Alex heard a sound. He heard it once. Twice...WOOSH! Alex fell into a whole and screamed in terror. Is this going to be my last breath? Well I deserved this. Thought Alex. Will this really be Alex's last breath? Or will he live. Did Alex deserved this? Tell why or why not below!
PS. I'm little, deal with it....I think Alex's picture is a bit off
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| | | Relora Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776 Join date : 2010-11-30 Age : 26 Location : Define "Location"
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 1:04 pm | |
| Sounds interesting to tell you the truth, I can't wait to see more ^^ | |
| | | Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:38 pm | |
| - Relora wrote:
- Sounds interesting to tell you the truth, I can't wait to see more ^^
Thanks:) I think I might be posting chapter one around today or so? I'm finishing the 2nd lord today | |
| | | Winnowill Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1929 Join date : 2011-10-28
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 4:41 pm | |
| This sounds intriguing, I really like your concept.
I'm excited to see more of it. ^^ | |
| | | Squirtle Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791 Join date : 2011-12-04 Age : 21 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:42 pm | |
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| | | ashsal833 Senior Fantagian
Posts : 292 Join date : 2011-07-04 Location : AZ
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 5:44 pm | |
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| | | Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Mon Mar 26, 2012 7:12 pm | |
| Yay! The 1st chapter is release but not quite finished yet... | |
| | | Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:27 pm | |
| Sorry for double posting but...
The 1st chapter is finished Guest | |
| | | Blue Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3257 Join date : 2011-05-04 Age : 110 Location : How am I supposed to know? D; LOCATING MYSELF IS HARD.
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:32 pm | |
| I like this story, you just need to improve your punctuation. ^^ 9/10 | |
| | | Misty Life Regular Fantagian
Posts : 150 Join date : 2012-03-13 Age : 20 Location : I'll tell you later, I'm eating a cookie
| Subject: Re: Lords Of Shadows Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:48 pm | |
| - Snapple wrote:
- I like this story, you just need to improve your punctuation. ^^ 9/10
I was kinda lazy hehe | |
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