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Melissa H.
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| Subject: Katniss!!!!  Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:56 am | |
| i made katniss!!! look!!!!!! - Look just Look at it!:
please rate critique and other stuff new and improved one - Spoiler:
Last edited by ~Marci~ on Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:53 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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pokeranger
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 10:59 am | |
| Pretty good. The head's a wee bit too big. | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:00 am | |
| okie thanks in nor good with head sizes | |
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Usui
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:22 am | |
| I like it, This is pretty Good.
But her Head is a bit too big.
But this is really good though. c: | |
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Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:44 am | |
| I love it! The head is a bit to big but still, AWESOME!!! | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:17 pm | |
| it's cute but why is she white with blue eyes. did you read the book. did you.
anyways, when she shoots her arrows, she pulls it up in front of her face, not by her abs.
& she's standing very awkwardly..
I think you did a good job on shading the braid & the facial expression.
but the mockingjay pin isnt a mockingjay D:
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el
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:24 pm | |
| - Open for critique:
Tell me if you can't read it. I couldn't find right pen pressure. Also, I know I use a tablet and you probably use a mouse, but at least try. c: It really helps a lot. | |
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castiel
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:45 pm | |
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:53 pm | |
| The head is big and thats it.
8/10 | |
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Monsterbunny
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 1:55 pm | |
| Yep the head is a bit too big
8.9/10 | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:52 pm | |
| ok thanks guys!!! so i did wut fuko and bby said so heres the new one:::::::::::::::::::: - >:3:
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:55 pm | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Sun Apr 08, 2012 11:59 pm | |
| why ank yauhh >:3.
<]:)-/--< | |
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Blue
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:10 am | |
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IM MELODY'S HACKER!!!!
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 2:56 am | |
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troller mcloller
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 7:53 am | |
| Its really nice but whats wrong with her eye ? | |
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RadioGummie
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:02 pm | |
| I guess she's squinting so she can aim her arrow.
& are we all posting katniss drawings now? I thought this was for marci. | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 12:20 pm | |
| That's much better! I give it a 9.5/10. | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:02 pm | |
| @teddie
please dont post YOUR art in MY topic | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:02 pm | |
| There's some anatomy problems that have been pointed out already, but it's cute. (: | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: Katniss!!!! Mon Apr 09, 2012 1:06 pm | |
| but i added fingers...!! see?!  | |
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