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Abbey
Former Staff
Posts : 1462
Join date : 2010-07-18
Age : 26
Location : IG @the.abbsta
| Subject: Improvement!  Mon May 07, 2012 11:27 am | |
| Yeah. Here is the old version, done September 23rd 2011: - Spoiler:
Here is my new version, which I started a day ago and finished today: - Spoiler:
Side by side: - Spoiler:
I think I improved.  | |
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Weekays
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2616
Join date : 2011-07-24
Age : 21
Location : rlly
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 11:43 am | |
| u did improve but it depends on wich way you put it idk if its just me but the first ones eyes are better you improved the boats and alot more i just thinks the hair and head and mouth was better on the first one But yah anyways you did improve ITS AWESOME  ! | |
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Abbey
Former Staff
Posts : 1462
Join date : 2010-07-18
Age : 26
Location : IG @the.abbsta
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 11:45 am | |
| - weekays0 wrote:
- u did improve but it depends on wich way you put it idk if its just me but the first ones eyes are better you improved the boats and alot more i just thinks the hair and head and mouth was better on the first one
But yah anyways you did improve ITS AWESOME ! Personal preference, I think. I can see where you're coming from. The thing is my art kind of changed styles so it looks different? xD But thank you. | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 1:54 pm | |
| you did improve a lot but you were always good | |
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Abstract
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 24
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 4:21 pm | |
| Wow, that's very much improved. ;o
I just don't like the face as much as the first picture though. ((((my opinion)))
Actually you know what? It looks like she grew up... very very fast.
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 4:28 pm | |
| i think you have definitly improved and yes youve canches styles A LOT :DDDD but thats guud!
i like the september hair betta tho | |
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o
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270
Join date : 2011-11-11
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 6:48 pm | |
| You definitely have improved, and your improvement is amazing! I can tell that you worked hard on both of them. The only thing is, the fingers on the girl's left hand on your newer drawing look a bit small, if you know what I mean. But hey, drawing fingers that aren't straight is super difficult and you did pretty good on the hand. | |
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WeddingPainter
Junior Fantagian
Posts : 51
Join date : 2012-05-05
Age : 29
Location : Narnia~
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 7:09 pm | |
| Woah. You are soo good at drawing OuO | |
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alex
Moderator
Posts : 23507
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 25
Location : google maps
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 8:07 pm | |
| you make beautiful art
tears | |
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RadioGummie
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1416
Join date : 2010-09-08
Age : 26
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 11:26 pm | |
| they're both beautiful *0*
But I think the torso is more proportioned on the first one, than the second one.
but they both so purdee.
HAY BBY WHERES MY ICON HUH | |
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Guest
Guest
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Mon May 07, 2012 11:42 pm | |
| Abbey, your art is beautiful. |
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Pieee
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 313
Join date : 2011-12-10
Location : drowning
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Tue May 08, 2012 2:23 am | |
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FantageJenny2466
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 205
Join date : 2012-02-19
Age : 28
Location : downtown
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Tue May 08, 2012 1:02 pm | |
| OwU okay my topics are weird | |
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v
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Posts : 9590
Join date : 2010-02-07
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Tue May 08, 2012 7:03 pm | |
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Relora
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6776
Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 26
Location : Define "Location"
| | Subject: Re: Improvement! Thu May 10, 2012 1:46 pm | |
| The torso, nose and hands improved to me :3
Though I always loved the original so my heart must stay with it ;o | |
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