Drawing Im Gonna Finish Today :)

okay i just drew this drawing it didnt take me too long but it did take alot of ereasing ^_^

here it is

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Its very very kidish ToT Please rate and crituqe

i like it! I just think that the arms don't look right. can you post the finished picture also?

I will when i have finished it i cant be bothered to do it now since my hands hurt

Critiques? Hmm I guess I can say one part of the skirt is smaller than the other side. The arms look a bit short. The head, unless if it was supposed to be that way, a bit to big, or the body size is kind of short.
I know, some people are short though, but just saying. xD I give it a 6.8/10 for what you've done so far I guess.

I'm criticisizing Well the feet looks weird it looks like her feet are sticking out TBH don't feel bad but the hair looks like pink paint has spilt over the hair.The bow on the dress on the belt looks big on one side and small on the other.The arms are too short.The eyes are not joined up.The skirt looks big on one side but not on the other thats what ^ said

Thanks i was criticisizing jus tto help you dont feel bad

-Waffle