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Melissa H.
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| Subject: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD  Sun Jun 03, 2012 8:54 pm | |
| OH MY GODS IM SO PROUD OF THIS!! [b]please, NO critism only constructive critism - Spoiler:
if you cant see it tell me so i can put an outline round it. added Reyna&Jason in her imagination but imma scan it. rate and critique!!!!! so frikkin proud! ;`) | |
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Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:03 pm | |
| I love it! 10/10 it is awesome! | |
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alex
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:34 pm | |
| Her head and neck are in a real awkward position, why are they tilted like that? HAve you tried doing that pose in real life? It's uncomfortable. | |
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♠Luka♠
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:39 pm | |
| My how much you've improved  | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sun Jun 03, 2012 9:40 pm | |
| One hand is fatter/thicker than the other.
Shade more, makes it a bit more realistic.
I don't understand what you are looking at either, and it seems a bit stiff.
I give it a 7/10. I don't remember all of your artworks, but this must be your best one.
And sorry, I don't know what is the biggest difference between critiques and criticism so... | |
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sun Jun 03, 2012 10:32 pm | |
| This is really good, but I suggest you lower the arms so they are resting on her legs. It would look more relaxed, and the pose would look way better if you did. I don't want to explain too much, but I really think the arms should be resting on the legs to improve your drawing. 8/10 Great work!  | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Mon Jun 04, 2012 3:39 pm | |
| ok thsnks
anddd zuko: shes tilting her head cuz shes sad call me crazy, bt i do that too...
pika: yeaaa i made sum changes to Pipes when i was drawing Reyna & Jason... im adding the finished pic now. | |
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Rufistar
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Mon Jun 18, 2012 10:05 pm | |
| Makes sense to draw Jason, but how could she have met Reyna?  This is just the official pic of Reyna from Rick's blog. Maybe it'll help you? But I don't really like the expression on her face, do you? | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Sat Jun 23, 2012 8:03 pm | |
| ita a fanfic seen from MoA,
if you read the THO books i think youd understand
and yes i do jus shes all happ y and googlyey eyed cuz jasons back. and Pipers worried thats going to happen.
wait, now that im explaining this, im just gunna make a Fanfic | |
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TheShyOtaku
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Mon Jun 25, 2012 10:01 am | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Wed Jun 27, 2012 9:57 pm | |
| thanks.
and on july 7th im going to draw it agian! | |
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Lenka
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Wed Jun 27, 2012 10:23 pm | |
| AW!!!! OMIGOSH!! IT'S ADORABLE!!!! You should ink it and color it!!! | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:16 pm | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:27 pm | |
| You drew yourself...CONGRATZ
1000000000000000000000000000000/10 | |
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Melissa H.
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| | Subject: Re: YAY i drew Piper!!!!!! ;DD Thu Jun 28, 2012 1:33 pm | |
| no, heh, i just chose it as my username cu i like it, | |
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