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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| Subject: Melissa, My OC. and something else  Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:18 pm | |
| Well i used MS Paint for this i know the shading is stupid. - Spoiler:
i also made a fanart of percy's sister, or a gender bender?: - Spoiler:
PLEASE RATE AND CRITIQUE
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3agle
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 440
Join date : 2012-01-26
Age : 24
Location : Google
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:24 pm | |
| I like them.
8/10
I think (in the second one) the green doesn't look right with the orange, I think red would work better. | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:24 pm | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Mon Jun 25, 2012 6:39 pm | |
| - 3agle wrote:
- I like them.
8/10
I think (in the second one) the green doesn't look right with the orange, I think red would work better. i agree but thats her camp shirt and shes the daughter od Poseidon | |
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Lenka
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3929
Join date : 2012-06-17
Location : clap aloNG IF YOU FeeL THA t hapPINESS IS THE //TRUTH//
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:19 pm | |
| I love them! 9/10! The only thing is (and this might just be my opinion) the wrinkles on the second ones shirt look a little weird, but that's it! I think they look awesome! Great job! | |
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Abstract
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 24
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Mon Jun 25, 2012 7:25 pm | |
| 9.5/10
Gurlfrand~ I love them, but here is the thing:
Collarbones, the second picture needs more shading under those "wrinkles" or whatever, the smile is a bit to round, and that's it.
I think the shading just needs to improve, the rest of the piece is really good. (I don't exactly know your style) | |
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ℓσкє
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 312
Join date : 2012-06-20
Age : 22
Location : エドラス
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Tue Jun 26, 2012 3:59 am | |
| 10/10.
Why does everyone care about shading? Everything looks great... | |
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Usui
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275
Join date : 2011-09-09
Age : 24
Location : Worldbuscus
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Tue Jun 26, 2012 8:53 am | |
| Wow this is really good. c:
The shading is okay, but a bit off.
I can see you're really improving. ^-^
So I would rate this 9.1/10. | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: Melissa, My OC. and something else Tue Jun 26, 2012 11:44 am | |
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