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PostSubject: Angela (SCARY STORY FULL)   Angela (SCARY STORY FULL) Icon_minitimeFri Jun 29, 2012 12:00 pm

So my friend and I have been writing a bit for a contest in school I wanted to have you guys read it please c:

what it's about:

The story!!:

Yes it's done! Well thats not all I have written, Thats just all I want to type, I'm tired,lol Crit please c: (no rude crit)


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PostSubject: Re: Angela (SCARY STORY FULL)   Angela (SCARY STORY FULL) Icon_minitimeFri Jun 29, 2012 10:46 pm

It isn't really scary, but its quite good.

8/10
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PostSubject: Re: Angela (SCARY STORY FULL)   Angela (SCARY STORY FULL) Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2012 1:13 am

Wow this is really cool but you should make it scarier.
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PostSubject: Re: Angela (SCARY STORY FULL)   Angela (SCARY STORY FULL) Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2012 9:31 pm

it gets scarier as you go along c: I'll post more
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PostSubject: Re: Angela (SCARY STORY FULL)   Angela (SCARY STORY FULL) Icon_minitimeSat Jun 30, 2012 9:36 pm

Good!
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