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+4Usui ℓσкє Roc Hijohshiki Mr.Noah 8 posters |
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Mr.Noah
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| Subject: My Sister -Drawing-  Fri Jun 29, 2012 11:21 pm | |
|  This is my sister ;] enjoyy please rate & please tell me what I should fix thanks :3 | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
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ℓσкє
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 4:13 am | |
| The hair and the lips.
7/10 | |
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Usui
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 7:49 am | |
| This is pretty good but, why is there a white spot in the middle of her hair? It's supposed to be brown.
Also one of her legs, look their chopped off and her body is a bit skinny.
Overall this was really cute and good. So I would rate it 7.8/10. :3 | |
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Dog
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 8:01 am | |
| I rate it 6. I like how you tried to make it three dimensional, but the 3-D hair looks kind of strange. It's a good drawing though! | |
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Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 8:27 am | |
| 8/10. you did pretty good! | |
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Mr.Noah
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:09 am | |
| - Takuto wrote:
- This is pretty good but, why is there a white spot in the middle of her hair? It's supposed to be brown.
Also one of her legs, look their chopped off and her body is a bit skinny.
Overall this was really cute and good. So I would rate it 7.8/10. :3 Yea I know the thing is when I did the red back ground I took off the sel and then it kinda took off some of the hair and the body parts then I didnt have time to fix it because it was late but thanks :] | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:36 am | |
| Cute :3 are you a beginner? If you are you done a great job!
--im not saying its bad-- Its just that some of it just doesnt look proper but CUTE :3 thats so Kawwai! | |
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Mr.Noah
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:42 am | |
| - Weekays0 wrote:
- Cute :3 are you a beginner? If you are you done a great job!
--im not saying its bad-- Its just that some of it just doesnt look proper but CUTE :3 thats so Kawwai! Yea I am a beginner but I drew something on steps on a utube video and it came out good I am a good follower but the problem I have it with the hair I suck at drawing hair so it didn't come out great but thanks  | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:47 am | |
| Would you like me to pm you a tip (: it works its how i draw.. | |
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Dog
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 9:49 am | |
| The shading is a little bit odd. The colouring just isn't quite right. Maybe the shading could have been done with a smaller brush or in several different colors. It's a good drawing though. | |
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Weekays
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:07 am | |
| I find the shading fine its just that the chunks out of the hair looks like a crocodile has ate it :3 | |
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Mr.Noah
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:23 am | |
| - Weekays0 wrote:
- I find the shading fine its just that the chunks out of the hair looks like a crocodile has ate it :3
xDDD Guys look at my recoloring I think I did a good job !! Critiques please | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 10:24 am | |
| I like this, it's very cute. But maybe you want to add a little colour to her skin? | |
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Mr.Noah
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| | Subject: Re: My Sister -Drawing- Sat Jun 30, 2012 11:16 am | |
| [quote="Rue"]I like this, it's very cute. But maybe you want to add a little colour to her skin?[/quote
I was going to color her skin but I don't know which color to use it just doesn't look right
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