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| Subject: Adventure time story im making! PLZ READ!!!! Sat Jul 07, 2012 3:20 pm | |
| WARNING! This may be a little inapropiate, but here it goes. By the way when im saying I in the story, i mean Marceline. Please read it all! Open the spoiler. Oh and by the way at the end of chapter 3, im working on chapter 4. - Spoiler:
Adventure to Hoo By Ula Bitinaitis Marceline the Vampire queen
Chapter One: PB’S invention
CRASH! The door slammed open as Finn and Jake tumbled to the
ground. “Yo Marcy! Watup?” Finn said. Knock please! I was just minding my
own business, sucking up the color of a fresh, pile of raspberries. “Hey
guys.” I said gloomy. They had a puzzled look on their faces. Marcy, what’s
the matter? Let’s go strangle some pixies! “Maybe later guys, I’m not really
in the mood.” I tuned my base slowly, playing the same notes over and over
like Jake’s viola. “Come on! Tell me,” Jake said. He turned small, walked up
on my base, and started doing a dance. He was humming something, but I
couldn’t understand. But as the hums came together in my head, he was
singing, “Marcy, feel better, lalala ya lala,” I rolled my pitch black eyes and
continued on with my glum face. Jake stretched and scooped me up, while I
was still in the same position as I was on the couch. “By the way Marceline,
you’re getting good at that!” I mumbled “Thanks.” As I went outside with the
sun beating down on my face, I started to shriek, “Hisssss!” I whispered. I
started to burn. Oh no! Finn shrieked. Jake stretched an umbrella, and I
started to feel better. Finn sat next to me, blatting out words as usual. I tried
to get the keywords of my problem. Like. Someone. French fries. The last
one was just because I was hungry. But the last sentence he said caught my
ear. “So what’s the probs?” I started to shake. “Fine, I’ll tell you.” I started to
cough. “Um, you know how I’m just a teen?” My pale face started to grow
snow white. “I think I’m looking for the someone. Not you though, your way
to young. I mean, all these years trapped in my den, I think it’s time for me
to move on. But who would lo- ahem. Who would want to like a vampire
freak like me?” Finn opened his mouth to speak, but it said nothing. Jake was
snooping on me for the whole time. I glared at him. Finn told me that that
someone is going to come for you, and a whole bla speech. Whatevs. I
floated off Jake and got a umbrella with black kittens on it. “My grandma got
me this.” I mumbled. I purposely tried to change the subject. As we went
through bushes, streams, and figs, we found a bunch of fire pixies wandering
around. “YALALALALA!” Finn screamed. He ran into the pixies and started to
dance around with Jake, back in his normal form. I laughed as I watch those
goofballs run around. ~Daddy, why did you eat my fries, and I crie-~ my
ringtone buzzed. Ugh. PB again. I had no choice, because I didn’t want my
pocket to be buzzed all day. Beep! “Hello?” I said. Mhmm. Ya whatever. Ok,
Got it. Ok ok I’ll be there! Don’t rush me. Bye. Beep! I walked over to Finn
and Jake, as the pixies flew away. Princess Bobble-head wants us to come
over to the Candy Kingdom. I said. Finn mumbled right at the end, “Don’t
call her that.” Jake stretched us all the way to the Candy Kingdom. I
watched the candy people as they fooled around. As two gumdrop girls, one
pink, and one blue, scampered over me, the blue one said, “Girl, you gotta
get a tan.” I did a mad face, picked them up, and started playing with them
as action figures. I still did, while Princess Bubblegum came over. Wearing
her nerdy glasses as usual. “Guys, I need you to test something
IMPORTANT. It’s for tonight’s Science BBQ.” Finn raced over closer, blushed,
and said “Yes, yes ok, k! All fine!” Jake came over, and asked “What is this
thingy anyway?” I couldn’t hear the rest, but I think it was about some kind
of time machine. Not sure, Princess pink head is ALWAYS thinking of brainy
stuff.
Chapter 2: Another dimension
As Dawn turned to Dusk, the candy lamps glowed and the spotlights shown.
The smell of Sugar chicken wings, hamburgers, and hotdogs filled the
kingdom. Princess shown up on stage. “Everybody! We will now be
presenting, the ultimate dimension molecule-transport thingy, guest stars,
Stars? Marceline, Jake, and Finn the hero!” The crowd went crazy, but as I
shown up on stage, everybody stopped and stared. They remember how I
hate them so. I rolled my eyes and looked at PB. She whispered at us to go
in the device. I told everybody that we were going to go in the device and
come back safely, and about half of them clapped. Big deal. I walked in, with
shooting rainbow lights as I walked in. I heard something outside. I turned
around, Oh no! “Princess, I’m hungry!” Cinnamon bun ran across the stage,
acting stupid. He tripped on a wire, CLICK! Finn and Jake saw what was
happening, and I raced over. My hand was over the bubble-like film, and
pretty soon, we were gone. I screamed! We landed in somewhere which was
like the candy kingdom. But someone was holding up a banner, “ALL HAIL
PRINCE GUMBALL!” I looked strangely. I looked around. No sign of Finn, but I
did see Jake. “FINN!” I called. Finn came rushing over, with something in
his hands. Marcy, Jake, look! I found these cool stone-“ Finn stopped, looked
terrified, dropped the stones, and shivered. ”What’s the matter?” I asked. He
started to lift up his hand and pointed to my hand.
My hand was cut off.
I dropped to the floor, trembling and screaming, Blood was running down my
arm! SCREAM! Pretty soon, that was the last thing I knew before I blacked out.
Chapter 3: Gimme a hand!
When I woke up, I saw a blur. It looked like Finn, Jake, a cat, some girl that
looked like Finn, and some vampire like me. The boy vampire spoke. He
leaned closer to my face.“ Are you alright?” I pushed him out of my face,
and realized my arm had no hand. The top was pinkish, and wrapped in a
bandage. As the vampire rubbed his face, he mumbled. The blur was coming
together. I sat on a hospital-like bed, and I wiped my eyes with my good
hand. I quickly stared at the guy who looked like PB, the cat and the Finn-
like girl, and the vampire. I blushed at him. The vampire said, “I had to
carry you out in my arms because you blacked out. If you didn’t mind, I
sucked some bad blood on the grass floor.” I blushed more, I looked like a
tomato. “I’m Marshal-lee. This is Fiona, Cake, Prince Gumball, and I suppose
you know these two.” He stuck out his tongue that looked like a snake’s, and
did a “hang loose” with his hands. Fiona just waved. I looked at Cake, but all
she was doing was looking at Jake, with her tail frizzed up. Pretty soon, the
static made our hair slowly go up. We all laughed, and I took a long, night
rest. When I woke up, it looked like I was in a bed that looked just like my
room. Aw poo, it must have been a dream. I woke up, but suddenly I heard
something in the kitchen. “Mommy, why did you drink my milk, and I cried,
but you didn’t see me cry. Mommy, do you even love me,” I sneezed.
Marshal-lee dropped his base and looked up in the hallway. I zoomed to my
bed and pretended I was sleeping, and pretending to say “sugar plums” all
night. Marshal lee pushed me off the bed and said “Wake up, day dreamer!”
I landed on my bad arm, I was still on the ground, twitching, and Marshal
came over. He twisted me around, and he saw that my bad arm had a
bruise, and I was shutting my eyes tightly. Guess it was not a dream after
all. “Oh my gosh I am so sorry!” he said. I struggled to get up, and I went
outside. Jake and Cake came over, eating some ice-cream. “What’s wrong
girl?” Cake said. I told them how Marshal-lee pushed me and stuff. “That’s
sad,” Jake replied. Fiona came over, while the sun was about to set. She
gave me another bandage cloth, and smiled. “You’re welcome.” She said. I
wrapped the cloth slowly around the bruise. Boom. Boom. Boom. I heard
some noise far away, and it seemed like it was getting closer. It looked like
a tiny goblin. But as soon as it got closer, it looked like a dragon, the size of
Ooh! It was… wait what? It looked like an ice QUEEN, but not the ice
KING. “Fiiinn? Where are you?” Marshal-Lee came out, with his base. ICE
QUEEN! He shouted. Finn came out too, with his rusty sword. “Who the hey
are you?” Finn shouted. Fiona also got out the sword Prince Gumball gave to
him, while cake was stretching as the same size as the ice worm. The five
started to fight, and if you’re wondering why Ice queen looked like the size
of Ooh, well, she was riding a huge ice worm, THAT was the size of ooh. The
antennas made it look like goblin’s hands. Back to the story, I watched the
two fight the ice worm and queen, Finn slicing the worm in half breaking into
a million pieces, and Marshal Lee trying to cut up the Ice queen with his
base. I gazed at him, looking quiet love-struck. He played a loud note, with
the sound waves knocking Ice queen over. He sliced her hair and kicked him
all the way to the nightosphere. “Wow…” I said. As Marshal-Lee started to
brag about his skills and stuff, it turned to pitch, black night. The fireflies lit
up and flew around us. “Boy, it sure it romantic here.” I said. I gazed as the
moon rose up to the top of the sky. Finn watched us talk and talk, and
whispered “love birds.” He and Jake, Fiona, and Cake went back inside to
rest. So me and Marshal were alone together… it was pretty awkward. Cake
got a radio, put a CD in it, and went outside and turned it on. She winked,
and went back in. I leaned close to his face, and he went close to my
eyes. “You know…” he whispered. “Your eyes look so beautiful in the
moonlight.” I blushed.
Smooch!
Chapter 4, Either Love or Death
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