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Do you like my colouring and lineart?
I only like the lineart!
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I only like the colouring!
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Yes yes yes!
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Its okay
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No no no!
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Weekays
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PostSubject: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:13 pm

Okay i got bored, So i drew something on Paint.NET but coloured on Paint tool sai!
It was really fun :3, And i made the hair texture cool, Just from some mistakes!
Here we go

Okay well rates and crituqies ( typo) I will tell you if you crituqie on somethin thats supposed to be there :3
Enjoy!
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PostSubject: Re: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:14 pm

its nice

i can't really tell whats wrong cuz i can't drw like tht
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PostSubject: Re: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 12:38 pm

Thanks :3
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PostSubject: Re: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 1:15 pm

She has chameleon hands. Did you try to kinda hide the rest of the fingers?

The shoulders are too square. Try making them a bit rounder.

What are those things that stick out on the bottom of her hair...

There is something seriously wrong with her hips. I know its probably some sort of style, but on this drawing it looks weird. Try to make them not stick out so much.

The folds on her chest are kinda weird. Maybe make them longer?

And the red goes on her hair and jeans. I know it's probably the brush. Can you zoom in on the drawing and make the brush smaller?



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PostSubject: Re: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 2:38 pm

She is very cute but I think her hips go out a little too much. Her shoulders should curve down not suddenly stop and go down you need to try to do the fingers I learned something. First try making five fingers the same length. Then add on to some of them to the right length then try that a couple times if you do that technique a couple times I bet you will get the fingers ;D
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PostSubject: Re: Some random artwork :3   Thu Aug 16, 2012 3:17 pm

Its Okie, I RLY LUV THE coloring on it but not so much with the lineart, I'v seen you do better!
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