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Snow
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| Subject: Failed drawing I made  Mon Oct 01, 2012 12:17 pm | |
| This is a big fail.  | |
| | | | Mr.Noah
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 3:01 pm | |
| You should add some shading to it next time c; But it looks rlly cutee | |
| | | | Squirtle
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:01 pm | |
| her head is waaaay too big. i know it should be like that, but make it a tiny bit smaller. also, you need shading. but i love the eyes, and you draw pretty well! | |
| | | | Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:04 pm | |
| - Idk if you want critiques:
All I can say is that the body should be more right (on the picture).
I'm not really sure if you were trying to do this, but the eyebrow on the bottom is a bit... weird?
Eyebrows may need more texture and to go a bit lower.
The hair should cover her whole back. It looks kind of odd if the hair is separated completely.
Shoulders. :K
It's not bad, it's nice. I give it a7/10.
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| | | | Roc Hijohshiki
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 4:05 pm | |
| Your drawing's not a fail! It looks chibi. I like the face, but like what squirtle said, the head is a bit too big. Nice drawing though! (^_^) | |
| | | | Snow
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 5:56 pm | |
| I agree the head is too big,but I am still learning. | |
| | | | Guest
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:03 pm | |
| Its cute. Chibis have huge heads so therefore its OK if you were intending that look.
7/10 |
| | | | churro
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:23 pm | |
| 6/10 good job  | |
| | | | alex
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| | Subject: Re: Failed drawing I made Mon Oct 01, 2012 6:41 pm | |
| - squirtle wrote:
- her head is waaaay too big. i know it should be like that, but make it a tiny bit smaller. also, you need shading. but i love the eyes, and you draw pretty well!
Not necessarily, I think that the size is okay, but it needs shape, and the neck is too wide. I'm not saying tht you should make her neck stick thin, but it should be a tad thinner. Good job, though! | |
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