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Primrose
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PostSubject: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:32 pm

This is the book the Diamond Candle, which is read by characters in the RP: The Lost Library. This story includes characters from the RP, and others that belong to my imagination. This story will hopefully give you a feeling of suspense, near-death experiences, adventure, drama and some love. Some characters from the RP will die after Chapter 11, please don't be offended if your character dies.

Chapter 1 - The Diamond Candle
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Chapter 2 - The Diamond Candle
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Working on it.


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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:33 pm

Wow, I love how you edited it.. COOL. Can I help you write it.. Just PM me or something and I will help out. Tell me what it's based on though, i'm good at writing stories.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:35 pm

Blackened~Waters wrote:
Wow, I love how you edited it.. COOL. Can I help you write it.. Just PM me or something and I will help out. Tell me what it's based on though, i'm good at writing stories.

This is supposed to be the book that they read in my RP, Lost Library.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:43 pm

This is awesome. Tee hee I hope my character dies. Yeah i know XDD
but seriously kill her or something in chapter 20 or what ever XDD
Your good at writing
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 11, 2012 7:52 pm

Clockworker's Doll wrote:
This is awesome. Tee hee I hope my character dies. Yeah i know XDD
but seriously kill her or something in chapter 20 or what ever XDD
Your good at writing

Thanks. I'll continue when I get inspired.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Tue Oct 16, 2012 8:12 am

Hmm... Not bad so far! Hope you could finish it!
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Tue Oct 16, 2012 9:57 am

That's really good! Can't wait for my character to come in.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 18, 2012 5:12 pm

I know it is for the RP lost library. I want you to let me help you write it?
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Fri Oct 19, 2012 7:07 am

Blackened~Waters wrote:
I know it is for the RP lost library. I want you to let me help you write it?
Sure, but I dont know how.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 25, 2012 12:16 am

this is a very good piece of literature, and i like your use of figurative language!!! but you're changing the verb tense from past to present, and that's rather confusing. just be sure to either stay past or present throughout the whole story! but other than that, this is amazing!!
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:15 pm

spookyhop wrote:
this is a very good piece of literature, and i like your use of figurative language!!! but you're changing the verb tense from past to present, and that's rather confusing. just be sure to either stay past or present throughout the whole story! but other than that, this is amazing!!
Thanks for the support!
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:20 pm

This is very good, and lots of nice words in it.
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PostSubject: Re: the Diamond Candle   Thu Oct 25, 2012 4:24 pm

I hope you continue this story i love it
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