| | Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) | |
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flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 22
| Subject: Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:32 pm | |
| The sunlight glows down onto my pale skin. I'm barefoot, and wearing nothing but a short, white dress that feels like a piece of cloth wrapped around my body. Even though i'm an official angel, Ribbon's guards insisted that they keep me in handcuffs just incase I try anything funny. So here I am, handcuffed to a poll. Unfortunately, the red marks on my hands are too weak, and they burst, spraying blood everywhere. I groan, wiping my bloody wrists on my dress, which leaves a big red blotch right smack in the middle. Thank God that most Angels are still sleeping. Most of them. When I turn around, I see two small Angels. My eyes Widen. Its Stream and Alyssa's little sister.
They raise they're eyebrows at me, then shake there heads. Alyssa's little sister comes forward. " Oh, why are YOU here?!" She spits at me. " I-I d-on't know." is all I say. " Well, I'm Janelle. Thanks for killing me, by the way." Then there off. I place my chin in my hands. I don't want to be here, and I don't deserve to be here. Eventually, the devil inside me will eat my heart, and I'll become evil. I can already feel the effects. I already know Alyssa is dead. I really wish I was with her. For good. I look at the "ground," which is really a bunch of clouds, and see a hole. I sigh. Closing my eyes, I through myself back. Maddie, Is now Deceased. I can almost hear Ribbons voice saying that. | |
| | | aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:45 pm | |
| I love it, again! Are you going to make another story? They're really good! | |
| | | Reese Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6320 Join date : 2012-11-12 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) Sun Dec 30, 2012 3:50 pm | |
| I love all your stories, the detail is mesmerizing ;w; Please continue! | |
| | | evan Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5295 Join date : 2012-11-03 Age : 22 Location : upstate baby
| Subject: Re: Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:22 pm | |
| Omg i just read all of them these are AMAZING! | |
| | | Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: Deceased. ( 5th Story in Maddie's Ghost.) Mon Dec 31, 2012 6:31 am | |
| - Rainbow. wrote:
- The sunlight glows down onto my pale skin. I'm barefoot, and wearing nothing but a short, white dress that feels like a piece of cloth wrapped around my body. Even though I'm an official angel, Ribbon's guards insisted that they keep me in handcuffs just in case I try anything funny. So here I am, handcuffed to a pole. Unfortunately, the red marks on my hands are too weak, and they burst, spraying blood everywhere. I groan, wiping my bloody wrists on my dress, which leaves a big red blotch right smack in the middle. Thank God that most Angels are still sleeping. Most of them. When I turn around, I see two small Angels. My eyes Widen. Its Stream and Alyssa's little sister.
They raise their eyebrows at me, then shake their heads. Alyssa's little sister comes forward. " Oh, why are YOU here?!" She spits at me. " I-I d-on't know." is all I say. "Well, I'm Janelle. Thanks for killing me, by the way." Then there off. I place my chin in my hands. I don't want to be here, and I don't deserve to be here. Eventually, the devil inside me will eat my heart, and I'll become evil. I can already feel the effects. I already know Alyssa is dead. I really wish I was with her. For good. I look at the "ground," which is really a bunch of clouds, and see a hole. I sigh. Closing my eyes, I throw myself back. Maddie, Is now Deceased. I can almost hear Ribbons voice saying that. I corrected your spelling. Good short story, I kind of like it. | |
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