Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeFAQSearchMemberlistRegisterLog inUsergroups


Share | 
 

 Two drawings

View previous topic View next topic Go down 
AuthorMessage
Abstract
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 16
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables

PostSubject: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:48 am

Spoiler:
 
Spoiler:
 

Critique roughly please.
Btw, the girl's hair makes the neck of her look long/thin. I noticed that.
(And I know, the shading is kind of off. It's thicker in real life, my camera's quality is kind of bad)
Back to top Go down
View user profile
taehyung
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3089
Join date : 2011-07-15
Age : 16
Location : somewhere

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:57 am

1st Pic:

Is that blue thing an eyebrow?Anyways, The eyes shouldn't have lots of white circles or whatever it's name is.Make thicker eyelashes in the middle and thinner when you go the end(Upper eyelashes) and down eyelashes should be in the left like the end of the eye,the opposite place of were the tears come from(Your forgot that thingy where the tears come from.And if that is the eyebrow it should be higher. The eye like the blue thingy should me circular and a bit above .
Rate: 7

2nd Pic:

The only problem is the eyes, It shouldn't be like a box (No offense) other than that it's okay.

Rate 9.5

I like the 2nd pic more.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
char
Hero Fantagian


Posts : 6313
Join date : 2012-11-12
Age : 17
Location : New Jersey

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 11:58 am

I think you did a spectacular job. But for the second picture, the eyes looked like boxes to me.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Abstract
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 16
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:00 pm

Yeah I really need to work on eye lashes. The first drawing was done at school though, which was rushed. (for an assignment)

And I was trying to do anime eyes, I'm not very sure how to do them well though.

Thank you for the advice. c:


Last edited by Abstract on Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:07 pm; edited 1 time in total
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian


Posts : 8763
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 14
Location : Somewhere

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:06 pm

They are really good.

You are very talented!
Back to top Go down
View user profile http://nerurumi.deviantart.com/
alex
Administrator
Administrator


Posts : 23506
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 18
Location : google maps

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:08 pm

Abstract wrote:
Yeah I really need to work on eye lashes. The first drawing was done at school though, which was rushed. (for an assignment)

And I was trying to do anime eyes, I'm not very sure how to do them well though.

Thank you. c:
All I can say for drawing anime eyes are to look up lots of refs. There isn't a said way to do it, so no tutorial is right, nor wrong. Personally, here are some I like. uwu {X} {X} {X} {X}

Anyways, I think your drawings are really nice, and they've definitely improved since last I saw them! ;w;

_________________


tumblr / 내 호버크라프트는 장어로 가득 차 있어요. ㅡㅅㅡ
thank u elliot for the pic of me n my gf♥
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Rufistar
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 3155
Join date : 2012-06-14

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:09 pm

L.O.L wrote:
1st Pic:

Is that blue thing an eyebrow?Anyways, The eyes shouldn't have lots of white circles or whatever it's name is.Make thicker eyelashes in the middle and thinner when you go the end(Upper eyelashes) and down eyelashes should be in the left like the end of the eye,the opposite place of were the tears come from(Your forgot that thingy where the tears come from.And if that is the eyebrow it should be higher. The eye like the blue thingy should me circular and a bit above .
Rate: 7

2nd Pic:

The only problem is the eyes, It shouldn't be like a box (No offense) other than that it's okay.

Rate 9.5

I like the 2nd pic more.

*Tear duct.

And yes, you shouldn't make too many highlights/sparkles on the eyes. And don't make eyelashes too curly.
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Abstract
Veteran Fantagian


Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 16
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables

PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Mon Dec 31, 2012 12:11 pm

Thank you for the references Len. Surprised
(I might just stick to making realistic eyes though)

And alright, I'll work on them more. Smile
Back to top Go down
View user profile
Sponsored content




PostSubject: Re: Two drawings   Today at 11:11 am

Back to top Go down
 
Two drawings
View previous topic View next topic Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Drawings of Pietja The Unskilled
» Hom Choi's Chat Drawings
» fantage drawings
» Lets Make Christmas Drawings! Screenshots! Images! Anything!
» My Drawings c:

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Artwork-
Jump to: