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Gabriella
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PostSubject: A Beautiful Day   Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:39 pm

I drew a digital picture. I am not good at digital art. Looking for crit:

picture:
 


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PostSubject: Re: A Beautiful Day   Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:46 pm

Land never ends.
What I mean:
 
When you make your land, go far out.
And I'm not sure if it was intentional to not shade, so I'll leave that.
And use light yellows and dark yellows (not too dark) for the sun. So it'll have more detail.
And technically you can never see the roots of a tree, so try to let them out. ^-^

It's a pretty picture though, I can't lie. :K
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PostSubject: Re: A Beautiful Day   Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:52 pm

Abstract wrote:
Land never ends.
What I mean:
 
When you make your land, go far out.
And I'm not sure if it was intentional to not shade, so I'll leave that.
And use light yellows and dark yellows (not too dark) for the sun. So it'll have more detail.
And technically you can never see the roots of a tree, so try to let them out. ^-^

It's a pretty picture though, I can't lie. :K

I didn't try to shade because I am only good at shading with recolors. I drew the roots because I see the roots of trees all the time. I tripped on one once.

Thanks for the tips! I'm glad you liked it. Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: A Beautiful Day   Mon Dec 31, 2012 8:10 pm

It's awesome, but the sun's rays look a bit short to me ;w;
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PostSubject: Re: A Beautiful Day   Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:52 pm

Nyan Cat wrote:
It's awesome, but the sun's rays look a bit short to me ;w;
That is because I drew the sun too close to the corner of the picture
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PostSubject: Re: A Beautiful Day   Wed Jan 02, 2013 3:07 pm

I think it looks really pretty! At my school, I always trip on this one trees roots..
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