Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing

Subject: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:16 pm

I was in a drawing mood,i'm always in a drawing mood hah & I decided to draw Kyoko because shes my favorite character in Madoka Magica even though she died D: WAH.Anyway,yea so I drew her.

Heres the drawing:

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Original Photo:

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PLEASE CRITIQUE AND RATE.

ALSO DONT STATE OUT THE OBVIOUS HEHEHEHEHEHEHEHEHE

Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10

Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:22 pm

Nyan Cat wrote:: Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10

My opinion:But I think the face is fine,besides the curves and all the messed up lines but thanks for your opinion! :p

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sat Dec 29, 2012 11:36 pm

Nyan Cat wrote:: Good, but her face is sort of flat and off. 6.5/10

I agree. The face's position is a bit weird. I'll give it a 7/10.

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Okay so her face, the eyes are too far apart. If this was a simplified chibu or something that would be okay but it looks wrong here. I don't like the way her nose looks but that's just me.
The head could be longer too. But I think this us cute

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 9:40 am

The nose is made how its suppose look like in the photo...Okay then thanks anyway.

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well the face is long/rectangle like
and the bow seems to be off the head
but everyone mentioned what is weird so i give it a 9!!

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:12 am

The face is a little bit wide, but other than that I love it. 9.8/10

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Sun Dec 30, 2012 10:20 am

Thanks Christmas Tree and Lauryn!

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:21 pm

Good job Noah! 9/10
My only critique is to make the face/chin more pointy and not so flat/round if you know what I mean.

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Dec 31, 2012 7:39 pm

8.5/10

Like everyone said, the head shape is too wide.
The chin.
Her right shoulder is not equal to the other shoulder.
Try raising shoulder more. (The part in between the shoulder and neck)

It's a cute drawing though, keep practicing.

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:28 pm

{ - - x .....................try adding colour next time....................... x - - }

7.2/10

lol

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Mon Jan 07, 2013 5:42 pm

glitters2335 wrote:: { - - x .....................try adding colour next time....................... x - - }

7.2/10

lol

Its a sketch,I didn't wanna add colour.

Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Tue Jan 08, 2013 4:07 am

So yeah, Ill give it 7/10

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Subject: Re: Kyoko Madoka Magica Drawing Wed Jan 09, 2013 4:41 pm

you can't just turn down every single critique you receive when you asked for critique

also nice drawing. I'm not gonna crit since everyone else pretty much covered it.

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