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Harmony
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PostSubject: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 3:46 pm

This is the first time I have posted my art on FF.& I think its time for you guys to know how I draw & whats my style.I do good when I want too,just depends how much effort I put into it xD Anyway Critique & Rate is welcomed on this thread.
I don't take things harshly,I also you want you guys to be COMPLETELY HONEST.

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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:21 pm

Adorable honestly. 9/10
Not sure if those are wings however. If they are, they must be even and a bit shorter.
And the fingers should be longer.
And some very minor stuff, like the shoulders being too low and such, but this is cute!
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:34 pm

Abstract wrote:
Adorable honestly. 9/10
Not sure if those are wings however. If they are, they must be even and a bit shorter.
And the fingers should be longer.
And some very minor stuff, like the shoulders being too low and such, but this is cute!

THANKS ;D But actually no its not wings shes laying on a cloud ;3 sorry if it confused you!
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 4:39 pm

The drawing is nice, but she has only 4 fingers? Also there is no shading on the skin and clothes. 8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:00 pm

Something about the mouth bothers me. It looks a little off-center. And maybe you want to fix the shading. But it's a good picture nonetheless. I can't say I could do better. 7/10.
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:02 pm

I just realized something, shouldn't the shine of the hear be place on the other side of the the heart? The sun is right, yet the shine is pointing left?
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Mon Feb 11, 2013 5:53 pm

I love how this is so cute and random at the same time~

9.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: New Drawing.   Wed Feb 13, 2013 4:27 pm

Simplicity wrote:
I love how this is so cute and random at the same time~

9.5/10

Gracias precious amiga!
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