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PostSubject: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:11 pm

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yeehaw feel free to rate and critique!!
please don't critique on the colouring though. u__u i messed up on it a lot


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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:12 pm

its cute 8/10 though, because her head looks a LITTLE to small for her body. other than that its good
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:14 pm

9/10 It's so cute but the pose is a little unnatural and the head is a little too small.
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:16 pm

Wow! I love the shading! Though the head is too small. 8.7/10
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:32 pm

thanks for your critiques!! uwu
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:47 pm

the high res looks really nice ubu

i can see that your light source is on the left side, and i love how you're trying different light sources! it will really help you!! but i can only see the shading, and not a lot of shadows. maybe look for some shading tutorials on deviantart to see how shadows work? i would try to help you, but i'm still learning shading too.
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 8:33 pm

shkfdh thanks! yeah, i haven't done actual art in a while so i lost all of my shading techniques. i'm soon (like week/month soon) going to study p hard on anatomy and colouring, so yess. uwu
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Sun Feb 24, 2013 8:38 pm

It is very good but the head is a bit small but it looks amazing ! 9/10
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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Mon Feb 25, 2013 3:50 pm

I think I'm the only one who feels that her head shape is a good size.. Ah, I'm not really sure.

For some reason, I think the "wrinkles" or whatever you call them on the shirt seem to be kind of stiff? I think you have improved however!!

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PostSubject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted   Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:36 pm

youve had this problem for like a y ear and im afriad you might have already incorporated it into your style but your bodies are waaaayayayay too long
also you suffer from safe face syndrome but that's a bit harder to get rid of so dont focus on that right now (or do, it's important)

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