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el
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| Subject: i finally LEGIT arted  Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:11 pm | |
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 EDIT: high-res!  [/img]
yeehaw feel free to rate and critique!! please don't critique on the colouring though. u__u i messed up on it a lot
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flower
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:12 pm | |
| its cute 8/10 though, because her head looks a LITTLE to small for her body. other than that its good | |
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aimi
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:14 pm | |
| 9/10 It's so cute but the pose is a little unnatural and the head is a little too small. | |
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Snow
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:16 pm | |
| Wow! I love the shading! Though the head is too small. 8.7/10 | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:32 pm | |
| thanks for your critiques!! uwu | |
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o
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 7:47 pm | |
| the high res looks really nice ubu
i can see that your light source is on the left side, and i love how you're trying different light sources! it will really help you!! but i can only see the shading, and not a lot of shadows. maybe look for some shading tutorials on deviantart to see how shadows work? i would try to help you, but i'm still learning shading too. | |
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el
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 8:33 pm | |
| shkfdh thanks! yeah, i haven't done actual art in a while so i lost all of my shading techniques. i'm soon (like week/month soon) going to study p hard on anatomy and colouring, so yess. uwu | |
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Silver
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Sun Feb 24, 2013 8:38 pm | |
| It is very good but the head is a bit small but it looks amazing ! 9/10 | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Mon Feb 25, 2013 3:50 pm | |
| I think I'm the only one who feels that her head shape is a good size.. Ah, I'm not really sure.
For some reason, I think the "wrinkles" or whatever you call them on the shirt seem to be kind of stiff? I think you have improved however!!
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Oliver
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| | Subject: Re: i finally LEGIT arted Mon Feb 25, 2013 4:36 pm | |
| youve had this problem for like a y ear and im afriad you might have already incorporated it into your style but your bodies are waaaayayayay too long
also you suffer from safe face syndrome but that's a bit harder to get rid of so dont focus on that right now (or do, it's important) | |
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