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PostSubject: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:30 pm

hi, im doing this again so its gonna be a comic and its gonna be entirely done in pencil because im extremely lazy x_x

her'es the cover its also in pencil because im so lazy ugggh
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Like a Star @ heaven what's it about, huh? Like a Star @ heaven
two boys going to a place they used to go to in their childhood a lot. it focuses on a boy named wallace (the tall one in the cover) and a boy named marcelo (shortie), but he's mostly nicknamed peaches.
the two just look at it and walk. it'll be pretty short. will be sad, probably uJu

Like a Star @ heaven when's it gonna update, punk? Like a Star @ heaven
whenever i want to, honestly... but ill always post when its updated!!! if you tell me to update it helps too.
THANKS FOR READING MY COMIC!!!!!!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 8:42 pm

Wow omg this is really cute, i can't wait for it to be updated. I bet its going to be great!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:09 pm

Omg, that's adorable. *~*
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:10 pm

It's so cute~ Can't wait for the update!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:11 pm

Witch wrote:
Wow omg this is really cute, i can't wait for it to be updated. I bet its going to be great!

Ee-yup!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:13 pm

first page!! very bad and dum b.

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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:28 pm

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also i got kinda excited and made the first page. sorry the handwriting looks so bad, ill try to fix it for next comic.
if you cant read something, tell me u_u""""

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Your handwriting isn't that bad, mines worse.
And it seems pretty interesting, I can't wait for the next.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:30 pm

yeah!!! thank you very much. i just replaced it with a font??? also looks horrible (even more so, even) but its more readable
like im just doing this for fun so don't expect it to be all that great,, U_U but im happy youre enjoying it so far!!!

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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:26 am

This is really nice. Maybe you should colour it.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 6:53 am

Its so cute! I like how you added the text on the computer. You should Ink it, it would be much more bold.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 4:44 pm

This is really interesting! ouo
I can't wait for the next page.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:01 pm

thank you!!!! i might colour it if i ever tsart taking it more seriously, but im a veery lazy person so that'll probably be a while.
the text in this page is kinda hard to read, but if you have problems ill help you read it, i guess??? four panels in this page are flashbacks, i hope its easy to tell which but if not ill tell you anyway
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 5:04 pm

Seems interesting Smile
Good work!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Wed Feb 27, 2013 11:54 pm

this looks like a very fun comic and I am excited to read more!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Thu Feb 28, 2013 12:18 am

Please make more soon! I want more of this cute friendship story!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:38 am

the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_-

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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 9:49 am

That is really good, it is interesting too. It played a movie in my mind.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 11:39 am

Oliver wrote:
the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_-

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What is that thing in the second panel? I can't tell.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 11:40 am

its just the place really badly drawn u_u·"" its meant to be a lot of mountains. sorry about that, haha

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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:02 pm

Oliver wrote:
the not very awaited third page!! also thank you ah, friendship is so underrated -_-

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Super adorable as always, can't wait for the next one!
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:03 pm

Oliver wrote:
its just the place really badly drawn u_u·"" its meant to be a lot of mountains. sorry about that, haha

Okay, thank you.
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Sat Mar 02, 2013 12:32 pm

Soooooo cuteeee! Peaches is really cute too~
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PostSubject: Re: peaches and a strawberry   Mon Mar 04, 2013 8:46 pm

I love this! This is awesome! I like the art
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