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Silver Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4143 Join date : 2012-07-17 Age : 23 Location : In my bedroom contemplating my life choices.
| Subject: Kitty GIrl Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:23 pm | |
| I am trying a new drawing style! A more chibi style also I tried using an airbrush to color it this time. Pkease critque I know some of the color is out of the lines please critque on it though. - Kitty girl:
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| | | Snow Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487 Join date : 2012-08-21 Age : 21 Location : Forever young
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Sun Jun 30, 2013 7:28 pm | |
| Its really cool!!! Though its better not to use airbrush..7.6/10 | |
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| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:38 pm | |
| - Oka wrote:
- Its really cool!!! Though its better not to use airbrush..7.6/10
I agree, airbrush isn';t a great tool, but its helpful for highlights! And your drawing is really cute 6/10 :3 The breasts look kind of odd? But that's just me so ehh XD |
| | | flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Sun Jun 30, 2013 8:59 pm | |
| The lineart is a bit shaky, and the breasts and ears look a little bit awkward. Other than that, she's cute. 6/10 | |
| | | aimi Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4743 Join date : 2012-09-02 Age : 23 Location : pledis ent. building
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:03 pm | |
| Really cute! It's a little out of proportion, but it's still quite nice. 6.5/10 | |
| | | Flynn Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278 Join date : 2012-01-14 Age : 25 Location : The gallows
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Mon Jul 01, 2013 6:35 am | |
| . The face is really strange looking, since it's all out of shape. . The boobs are all the way up on her shoulders. They should be lower down. . When you're drawing chibi style, you'll want to have the eyes really large and wide apart (like your avatar). . She should have hair at the back of her head unless she's wearing pigtails. . I don't know if this is just me but one ear is smaller than the other. Is that intentional?
Other than that, it's pretty good. 4/10 | |
| | | flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Mon Jul 01, 2013 8:33 am | |
| Another thing I forgot to mention is to try to make her look more cat-like? For example, you just put some cat-ears on her and called her a Kitty. Maybe you could make other details to make her look more feline? Possibly a tail, whiskers, or fur? I don't know, that's just me. | |
| | | Silver Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4143 Join date : 2012-07-17 Age : 23 Location : In my bedroom contemplating my life choices.
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:25 am | |
| Guy when critiquing please remember these things.
- I am new at drawing - I just got this tablet still trying to figure it out. - I have no good art programs because my parents are cheap - I only have 5 stupid tools on the program to use (pencil, paint, airbrush, fill, eraser) - I was making a bow on her breast but I forgot to add it. - the ears are intentionally that big
Okay done | |
| | | Miranda2 Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1319 Join date : 2012-08-25 Age : 23 Location : My own little corner of the world
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:38 am | |
| Uhm, for being new at Chibi... 5/10 other than that i like the colors | |
| | | flower Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7482 Join date : 2012-12-20 Age : 22
| Subject: Re: Kitty GIrl Mon Jul 01, 2013 10:38 am | |
| - Moka wrote:
- Guy when critiquing please remember these things.
- I am new at drawing - I just got this tablet still trying to figure it out. - I have no good art programs because my parents are cheap - I only have 5 stupid tools on the program to use (pencil, paint, airbrush, fill, eraser) - I was making a bow on her breast but I forgot to add it. - the ears are intentionally that big
Okay done You should have mentioned those things, then. How were we supposed to know? UwU | |
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