Before and after drawings

Before (2 years ago):

a wip of my new drawing:

The skanner made the skin color look a little bad, but I am still really proud of it. Also, the eyes in the new one was kind of inspiered from a drawing by the user hop.

I updated the characters clothing, too. When I made my first drawing 2 years ago, I made up a story that the characters are in. Lets just say, the story was really girly. I also made LOTS of changes to the characters story, and it is muchhhhhh less stupid.

So, yeah..You can critique or rate. Or both. Okay so I cant think of anything else so bye!

improvement! Very good lol

yea lot of improvement! good job!

That is a lot of improvement! Good job!

Oh my gosh the new drawing is really cute ;w;
You did a great job and that's an amazing amount of improvement uwu
The eyes also are really pretty, they're my favorite part of your drawing

The new picture is amazing!

My drawings are bad

SO MUCH IMPROVEMENTTTTTTTTTTTTOTOTOTOTTTTTTTTTT

Wow, you have improved a lot! c: It's really nice! Good job

Really good! my drawings haven't changed in 2 years.Probably because your going to be an artist :-D

wow, your art has gotten a lot better! you've really improved! (but i don't really draw eyes like that? unless that was in reference to my older drawings)

Wow! Its nice what practice can do for some one

Wooooowwwwwwwwww i love it!

AMAZING transformation 
The old one is like pretty cute and with the crinkly paper (?) it makes them look like unicorns heheh

THE NEWEST ONE IS LIKE WHOAAAAAA! The shading is great and clothes look really good
Critiques: the girl with the skirt's legs are a little bit off, I would say anatomy wise her thighs are too long and her knees would probably be a smidge below the skirt. But that could just be me 

Also some hair tips that might help:
http://koyamori.deviantart.com/art/Hair-Tutorial-91190696
(Though I know you we're going for anime kind of hair so the styles aren't exactly the same))


YOU IMPROVED ALOT!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!