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Rena
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 153
Join date : 2013-06-12
Age : 26
Location : at home being lazy
| Subject: Schoolgirl Character Edit  Fri Nov 22, 2013 10:06 pm | |
| So...I made a thing. What are your opinions on it?  | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2303
Join date : 2012-05-09
Location : Ah...
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Fri Nov 22, 2013 11:10 pm | |
| I've got to say, it looks great! Good job! (^_^) One thing in my opinion though. Maybe you could outline the bangs just like how you did to the other parts of the hair because the bangs are hard to see. (´･ω･`) | |
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Rena
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 153
Join date : 2013-06-12
Age : 26
Location : at home being lazy
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Fri Nov 22, 2013 11:31 pm | |
| Okay, thank you for the advice. I'll remember to do that. :3 BUT... I made ANOTHER thing, more like an improved/girlier version of what I made.  | |
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Roc Hijohshiki
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2303
Join date : 2012-05-09
Location : Ah...
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 12:22 am | |
| The second one looks better. The colors are cute! （‐＾▽＾‐） | |
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Snow
Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487
Join date : 2012-08-21
Age : 21
Location : Forever young
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 9:47 am | |
| It's is fantastic! I wish my school had uniforms that look like that ( my school doesn't have any kind of uniforms but I would want it to have them that look t
Like that ) | |
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Sandy
Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 868
Join date : 2011-07-09
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 12:42 pm | |
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flandre
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2166
Join date : 2013-01-01
Age : 22
Location : why do you even care?
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 1:58 pm | |
| i think the first one is better then the girly version. the girly version's hair looks a little weird to me...
First one: 9/10
Girly/improved: 8/10 | |
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Oliver
Moderator
Posts : 4588
Join date : 2010-03-03
Age : 24
Location : *lights up a fire* yeah, trying to surivve in a fores.t *smokse a cig* il kill you
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 6:11 pm | |
| hey!! thsi should go in fantage creations. topic moved, infraction given!
this is a lovely edit, btw! and the improved version is great too | |
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Rena
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 153
Join date : 2013-06-12
Age : 26
Location : at home being lazy
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sat Nov 23, 2013 10:24 pm | |
| Thanks everyone for the compliments. ouo
@Oliver: Sorry, I don't think I was thinking straight when I put up this topic. Thank you for moving it, though.-w-" | |
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Rue
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2067
Join date : 2013-01-13
Age : 21
Location : england
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:05 am | |
| First one Is simple and basic :10/10
Girly one i hate pink >.< sorry.....:8/10 | |
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X
Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 913
Join date : 2013-09-28
Age : 24
| | Subject: Re: Schoolgirl Character Edit Sun Nov 24, 2013 4:20 am | |
| Like Luminous said, the bangs could have used a bit more shading, but I like the Mercedes/Jean hair edit. The second one, putting my dislike for the color pink aside, is actually not that bad either.
First: 8/10
Second: 7.5/10 | |
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