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Misty
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PostSubject: New drawing by moi   Sat Jan 24, 2015 8:53 am

Ugly drawing


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PostSubject: Re: New drawing by moi   Sat Jan 24, 2015 10:23 am

Pretty good. Awesome job. I can't draw like you. I'll give you a 9/10. Your more talented than me. keep it up!
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing by moi   Sat Jan 24, 2015 11:09 am

I love it. 10/10. Keep being an awesome artist.
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing by moi   Sat Jan 24, 2015 1:13 pm

you did an awesome job! it's really cute ;A;!
i do have a couple things to critique on, though.
umm...let's start with hair? ye
i'm not too sure how to explain this? basically..make the hair go in a couple different directions near the ends, and don't make the ends too clumped together and repetitive.
ex:

you were really close, though! and the shape of the hair overall was done really well~

next, eyes.
these weren't too bad either! just one or two little flaws that i've noticed. the line under the eyes should be a bit thinner, otherwise it makes her look like she put on too much eyeliner or somethin' aha
one other thing. try to add a bit more detail to the eyeball. they do look fine as is, but maybe a little gradient from dark to light would be nice~ o:

and final thing..colouring.
i'm pretty sure you used pencil crayon?
try to press down a little harder to make the colour more full, and cover more white. you'll still be able to shade properly as long as you don't press too hard while doing your base colouring.

that's it! keep drawing and improving!~
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing by moi   Sat Jan 24, 2015 6:54 pm

jinta wrote:
you did an awesome job! it's really cute ;A;!
i do have a couple things to critique on, though.
umm...let's start with hair? ye
i'm not too sure how to explain this? basically..make the hair go in a couple different directions near the ends, and don't make the ends too clumped together and repetitive.
ex:

you were really close, though! and the shape of the hair overall was done really well~

next, eyes.
these weren't too bad either! just one or two little flaws that i've noticed. the line under the eyes should be a bit thinner, otherwise it makes her look like she put on too much eyeliner or somethin' aha
one other thing. try to add a bit more detail to the eyeball. they do look fine as is, but maybe a little gradient from dark to light would be nice~ o:

and final thing..colouring.
i'm pretty sure you used pencil crayon?
try to press down a little harder to make the colour more full, and cover more white. you'll still be able to shade properly as long as you don't press too hard while doing your base colouring.

that's it! keep drawing and improving!~


Thank you~ Yeah, I used colored pencils. They were really old though, i got some new ones today.
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing by moi   Mon Feb 02, 2015 11:49 pm

Awww, sugoi ^^ Very cute drawing ^__^ (hugs)
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