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xXlexiXx Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1588 Join date : 2011-01-27 Age : 105 Location : byeeeeeeee
| Subject: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:40 pm | |
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This is NOT colored yet,so it has no shading,I am still working on it,tell me what i need to improve and whatnot xD mmkai lol. 1-10 is the scale! bai! | |
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Penny Loyal Fantagian
Posts : 1659 Join date : 2011-07-28 Age : 90 Location : Yummy waffle...# Thank you, son. :]
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:44 pm | |
| Really good 7/10
You've been improving on not slanting her anatomy. | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:49 pm | |
| -Clean the edges -Her left sleeve has some pencil markings at the bottom -Her right arm is skinnier than the other -What's that line on her hair? -The thing "behind" her head doesn't look quite right -Still a bit slanted -Darken the outlines of her eyes -Darken the outline of her collar -Clean up her nose a bit -Her head is too fat. | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:57 pm | |
| 7.5/10 your getting better and better ^o^ | |
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alex Moderator
Posts : 23507 Join date : 2010-08-10 Age : 24 Location : google maps
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 8:58 pm | |
| - Anime wrote:
- you're getting better and better ^o^
Yeah. You are c: | |
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Blackrose Hero Fantagian
Posts : 7338 Join date : 2010-07-20
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:02 pm | |
| - Ani wrote:
- Anime wrote:
- you're getting better and better ^o^
Yeah. You are c: dang Ani lmao you keep quoting and editing my posts O_o good job peace | |
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v Moderator
Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:46 pm | |
| Nice, but needs a few adjustments.
Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c: | |
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Guest Guest
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 9:56 pm | |
| - Charlotte wrote:
- Nice, but needs a few adjustments.
Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c: What Charlotte said. :3
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Tue Sep 06, 2011 10:39 pm | |
| the sides r a bit messy no offense though | |
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RadioGummie Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1416 Join date : 2010-09-08 Age : 26
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:15 am | |
| *I can't tell if that's a crown or a bun :X *I think her nose and mouth are a little awkwardish looking. *The arms aren't proportioned. *and you defined the right side of her chest, but the left is just a curved line o_O *and the chin is too "squiggly" *I think her eye is too close to the end of her face.. unless you want her to have like a box head, I suggest giving her features some room to breathe. :3 | |
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lucia Passionate Fantagian
Posts : 948 Join date : 2011-09-04 Age : 23 Location : at my home
| Subject: Re: picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!) Wed Sep 07, 2011 1:20 am | |
| its way better then mine im horrible at drawing but im good at oragami! | |
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