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amandaso
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PostSubject: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 3:56 pm

My printer is finally working so I decided to post some drawings!

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rate 1-10 and please no rude coments
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 3:59 pm

Wow! They are good! But I have one question:

Is the first picture a drawing of Kirby?
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:00 pm

Yes kirby
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:02 pm

Oh, cool! You're good at drawing him!
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:03 pm

thanks lol
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:05 pm

YES KIRBYY!!
kirbyyy <3
TEHE
ill just rate for kirby Very Happy 9/10 yayy
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 4:06 pm

ty
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:24 pm

Wow! Great job! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 7:40 pm

i like the 2nd one but the shoes could use some improving : ) also arms,and lips the eyes could use only a TINY bit of improving (not hating suggesting) lol
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:06 pm

thx! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 8:56 pm

pretty cute
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:20 pm

Thanks Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:30 pm

9/10 these are way better than what I coudve drawn!
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 9:35 pm

lol ty
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 10:03 pm

Kirby Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 10:24 pm

-what britney said-
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Wed Aug 17, 2011 11:04 pm

Kirby was very good. The girl could use some touching up.


I assume the girl is a teenager judging from her attire. In that case she should have some curves. (Hips, bossum etc.) Her face was a bit deformed her lips were disproportionate to it's self (i.e. her top lips is a bit large when compared to bottom). The left arm is a bit "big" when compared to her right arm a bit of erasing and "relining" could fix that up. Her shoes were okay if I look at them I feel as if they are all-star converse maybe? If so the top of her toes shouldn't be so "up" and "chubby". Converse normally make the foot appear slim (I own a pair so I kinda know) and normally keeps the foot flat. (Though the tip of your toes can lift up slightly). Also when doing feet try angling them a bit differently. People's feet don't stick out and point out to opposite ends of the horizon it's just unnatural. Try a more 45 degree angle and adjust to drawing the top of the shoe and front of the shoe.


Over-all the picture was quite good.

Kirby rating-9/10
Girl rating- 6/10
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 9:33 am

Yea I haven't drawn a person in a while and I wasn't taking my time so it didnt come out so good.
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:01 pm

woow i like the both of them .... 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:10 pm

Very nice. But Relora's already pointed out the corrections I wanted to point out~

Kirby- 8/10
Girl- 6.5/10


You're good at drawing for your age C:
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 12:13 pm

thanks Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 1:29 pm

They're both slightly slanted.

9/10 for both.

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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:39 pm

OMG KIRBY Very Happy *poke poke poke poke poke* I love the girl's top Wink
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 2:45 pm

I agree with Relora, constructive criticism is always helpful. [:

The Kirby is fantastic.

On the other hand, the girl's pose is a Little Awkward or "Stiff." Her arms aren't proportionate.
Her face is a very odd shape, and It looks like she doesn't have knees.. But, I do like the way you drew her eye. Because I've never been good at drawing eyes and hands. Soo With that said.

Kirby - 8.5/10
Girl - 6/10
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PostSubject: Re: Drawings :D   Thu Aug 18, 2011 4:11 pm

I love Kirby!!!!!!! Very Happy

Like Relora and Radio, the girl just need some improvement :]

You did really good, tho. I usually suck at the body, you did better than what I could've done(:

Kirby- 9.5/10
Girl- 7.5/10
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