Drawings :D

My printer is finally working so I decided to post some drawings!

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rate 1-10 and please no rude coments

Wow! They are good! But I have one question:

Is the first picture a drawing of Kirby?

Yes kirby

Oh, cool! You're good at drawing him!

thanks lol

YES KIRBYY!!
kirbyyy <3
TEHE
ill just rate for kirby 9/10 yayy

ty

Wow! Great job!
9.5/10

i like the 2nd one but the shoes could use some improving : ) also arms,and lips the eyes could use only a TINY bit of improving (not hating suggesting) lol

thx!

pretty cute

Thanks

9/10 these are way better than what I coudve drawn!

lol ty

Kirby

-what britney said-

Kirby was very good. The girl could use some touching up.


I assume the girl is a teenager judging from her attire. In that case she should have some curves. (Hips, bossum etc.) Her face was a bit deformed her lips were disproportionate to it's self (i.e. her top lips is a bit large when compared to bottom). The left arm is a bit "big" when compared to her right arm a bit of erasing and "relining" could fix that up. Her shoes were okay if I look at them I feel as if they are all-star converse maybe? If so the top of her toes shouldn't be so "up" and "chubby". Converse normally make the foot appear slim (I own a pair so I kinda know) and normally keeps the foot flat. (Though the tip of your toes can lift up slightly). Also when doing feet try angling them a bit differently. People's feet don't stick out and point out to opposite ends of the horizon it's just unnatural. Try a more 45 degree angle and adjust to drawing the top of the shoe and front of the shoe.


Over-all the picture was quite good.

Kirby rating-9/10
Girl rating- 6/10

Yea I haven't drawn a person in a while and I wasn't taking my time so it didnt come out so good.

woow i like the both of them .... 10/10

Very nice. But Relora's already pointed out the corrections I wanted to point out~

Kirby- 8/10
Girl- 6.5/10


You're good at drawing for your age C:

thanks

They're both slightly slanted.

9/10 for both.

OMG KIRBY *poke poke poke poke poke* I love the girl's top

I agree with Relora, constructive criticism is always helpful. [:

The Kirby is fantastic.

On the other hand, the girl's pose is a Little Awkward or "Stiff." Her arms aren't proportionate.
Her face is a very odd shape, and It looks like she doesn't have knees.. But, I do like the way you drew her eye. Because I've never been good at drawing eyes and hands. Soo With that said.

Kirby - 8.5/10
Girl - 6/10

I love Kirby!!!!!!!

Like Relora and Radio, the girl just need some improvement :]

You did really good, tho. I usually suck at the body, you did better than what I could've done(:

Kirby- 9.5/10
Girl- 7.5/10