picture I made(again,NOT COLORED YET!!!)

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This is NOT colored yet,so it has no shading,I am still working on it,tell me what i need to improve and whatnot xD mmkai lol.
1-10 is the scale! bai!

Really good 7/10

You've been improving on not slanting her anatomy.

-Clean the edges
-Her left sleeve has some pencil markings at the bottom
-Her right arm is skinnier than the other
-What's that line on her hair?
-The thing "behind" her head doesn't look quite right
-Still a bit slanted
-Darken the outlines of her eyes
-Darken the outline of her collar
-Clean up her nose a bit
-Her head is too fat.

7.5/10 your getting better and better ^o^

Anime wrote:

you're getting better and better ^o^

Yeah. You are c:

Ani wrote:

Anime wrote:

you're getting better and better ^o^

Yeah. You are c:

dang Ani lmao you keep quoting and editing my posts O_o good job peace

Nice, but needs a few adjustments.

Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c:

Charlotte wrote:

Nice, but needs a few adjustments.

Hair isn't solid- it needs strands. The hair in the back needs to be a bit more clean, though. As for the body, the right side of the body seems to be curvier than the left side, if you know what I mean. The left arm is skinnier than the right. Clean up the spots where you erased a bit more. The mouth should be a bit higher. The eye is great, though, and so is the necklace. c:

What Charlotte said. :3

the sides r a bit messy no offense though

*I can't tell if that's a crown or a bun :X
*I think her nose and mouth are a little awkwardish looking.
*The arms aren't proportioned.
*and you defined the right side of her chest, but the left is just a curved line o_O
*and the chin is too "squiggly"
*I think her eye is too close to the end of her face.. unless you want her to have like a box head, I suggest giving her features some room to breathe. :3

its way better then mine im horrible at drawing but im good at oragami!