Trim the outline of the arms a bit. Her nose is facing the wrog way. The shine of her pupil should be to the other side if you want her facing the right. The neck is too long, too thin, and has a weird shape. She has no eyebrows. The shape of her shoulders are very weird, and too big. Her hair shouldn't have that "Buldge" at the top, and the bottom should stick out instead of being so round. She has no wrinkles in her dress, which says theres no shading.