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PostSubject: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:34 pm

heres my bad miku o.o

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enjoy o.o
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:39 pm

Not that bad 6.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:53 pm

I see improvement! :3

Color it more neat. It will make it look like a professional. The chin is a bit uneven, and the neck is a little too long. The body is a little skinny, but the skirt makes her look chubby. Fix the legs.

Well done.

EDIT; I forgot to add that you should lower the nose too. c:

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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 7:57 pm

yay :3 I'm improving xD!
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 8:28 pm

Change the facial figure. (: The nose should kinda be changed and so the mouth and eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:25 pm

Awesome!
The neck is a little long and the nose is a little too high. And the body is skinny but the way you placed the arms made the body that way a tiny bit.
Also take your time. Art isn't something you rush through. c:
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:25 pm

Mind explaining how I'm supposed to enjoy it?
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:32 pm

6/10
the arms look wierd and arms dissparead
face shape
other than that good i see
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Mon Sep 19, 2011 9:35 pm

Honestly, I don't like it.
Basically what everyone else said.

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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Tue Sep 20, 2011 6:55 am

I'm gonna make another soon and use these tips x3

@munny I ment enjoy crituqe

@homestuck xD I get that
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Tue Sep 20, 2011 9:49 am

what every1 else said and look at mai drawing miku

srry 4 being off topic
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PostSubject: Re: lawl its Miku time   Sun Sep 25, 2011 12:46 am

I got some tips for you : )

1. Start with some requalr texture

2. dont add too much backround

3. Do your best!


Hope this helps x)
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