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PostSubject: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 1:03 pm

Yaay. You clicked. Now here's your cookie.
Next, you must view my picture and rate it 1-10 and tell me what to improve on. I'm working on a picture, and this is the lineart so far. So before I start colouring, I want to know what I should change.
I'M HERE MANN o3o:
 
Yah. That's Hatsune Miku, if you're wondering.


If you have done as I asked above, you can take home one of these treats below:
If not then BYE :U
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:53 pm

10/10


I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO CRITQUE
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 2:58 pm

9.5/10
it great but kinda deformed arms/hands. but i'm incable of that ITS AWSOME
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:02 pm

9/10 her arms are to small and weird looking BUT it is very CUTE!
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:03 pm

7.1/ 10

It seems you are improving well.
The only thing that bothers me is the arms.


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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 3:46 pm

i like it, the arms are tiny then the body, but over all cute 8/10
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 4:02 pm

I like it, but Idon't really like the eyes.. 8.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:19 pm

7/10
Her breasts are a bit low, and her shape/curves are weird; which makes her looks chubby. Her shoulders are really small for her head size and so are the arms.
I REALLY LIKE THE HAIR THO, SOYAH OTHER THAN THAT I WUB IT.
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:20 pm

Very good but the arms are very VERY disproportionate

That's my only critique


7/10 nice job ^^


EDIT: oH GOODNESS tAOST DID POINT OUT THE BREASTS i COMPLETELY LOOKED OVER THAT LOL

6.5/10 IS MY NEW RATING STILL GOOD THOUGH

and I had caps lock on the whole time utcfuyvuyvuyv


oh well too lazy to fix it e.e
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 5:40 pm



The arms are too tiny, make them longer.

The neck is too thick. Make it thinner.

The hair looks rather stiff, try to give it a little more life.

Make her body an hourglass figure, not just random curves XD
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 6:01 pm

8/10

Her body looks too skinny for her head and her arms are too short and thin
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 6:12 pm

Aurora wrote:
Very good but the arms are very VERY disproportionate

That's my only critique


7/10 nice job ^^


EDIT: oH GOODNESS tAOST DID POINT OUT THE BREASTS i COMPLETELY LOOKED OVER THAT LOL

6.5/10 IS MY NEW RATING STILL GOOD THOUGH

and I had caps lock on the whole time utcfuyvuyvuyv


oh well too lazy to fix it e.e
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 6:15 pm

8.8/10.
I love it but I sorta think her body is a little chubby and her hands are a tad bit small.
Oh and idk but maybe try and make the hair a little bit smaller. (Though I sorta don't like Hatsune Miku i think her hair's naturally long.)
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:00 pm

I don't really get what all these other people are saying... Guess I'm not as good of an artist as some of you!
9.5/10! I really love this drawing, but I don't know who Hatsune Miki (Don't think I spelled that right... And I bet some of you are gasping right now xD ) At first I thought this was Utau from Shugo Chara :3 Whatever, you did an epic job in my opinion! (Which probably doesn't count Razz )
EDIT- Oh yeah! And why does she look all sad? I thought she was to be happy all the time or something xD
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Tue Oct 25, 2011 10:34 pm

OYA
9.5/10
Everything looks graet! Only thing, I find the arms a wee bit too small. You could make them bigger =D
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Wed Oct 26, 2011 6:54 am

-♥Aubrey♥- wrote:
OYA
9.5/10
Everything looks graet! Only thing, I find the arms a wee bit too small. You could make them bigger =D

agree
9.5
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Wed Oct 26, 2011 10:28 am

Thanks guys.
I definitely the arms went wrong, I was going to fix them anyways xDD
Breasts too.

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YOU SAID YOU HAS NO TABLET.
ZAT LOOKS LIKE TABLET.


Nope. No tablet. (Dad could not be bothered) I don't know why you think I haz a tablet xD
I just use a cheap wireless mouse. The computer mat is actually a hardback copy for business class. And I use a laptop o3o

Abbey wrote:


The arms are too tiny, make them longer.

The neck is too thick. Make it thinner.

The hair looks rather stiff, try to give it a little more life.

Make her body an hourglass figure, not just random curves XD

I have a very bad issue at making face structures, arms, legs and necks small and thick. I really need to improve on my anatomy skills~

The image looks really helpful, thanks so much :DD
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PostSubject: Re: CLICK HERE OR NO COOKIES. I MEAN IT GUYZ.   Wed Oct 26, 2011 1:44 pm

Comrade Mu wrote:
Thanks guys.
I definitely the arms went wrong, I was going to fix them anyways xDD
Breasts too.

Mr.Taost wrote:

YOU SAID YOU HAS NO TABLET.
ZAT LOOKS LIKE TABLET.


Nope. No tablet. (Dad could not be bothered) I don't know why you think I haz a tablet xD
I just use a cheap wireless mouse. The computer mat is actually a hardback copy for business class. And I use a laptop o3o

Abbey wrote:


The arms are too tiny, make them longer.

The neck is too thick. Make it thinner.

The hair looks rather stiff, try to give it a little more life.

Make her body an hourglass figure, not just random curves XD

I have a very bad issue at making face structures, arms, legs and necks small and thick. I really need to improve on my anatomy skills~

The image looks really helpful, thanks so much :DD
No problem! I love the eyes.
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