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PostSubject: nope   Fri Nov 18, 2011 12:15 pm

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PostSubject: Re: nope   Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:48 pm

I like it! But a little critique can't hurt, can it?

The only thing I'd say is her neck is a little large for her body. That's it!

9.9/10!
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Fri Nov 18, 2011 2:57 pm

Disagree with the comment above me. I think the neck looks fine. Let's look at a person:
http://thebuyosphere.files.wordpress.com/2010/07/steve_person.jpg
see his neck? It's about as wide as the face, as it holds it together. With anime styles, it's perfectly understandable and actually recommended to shrink the neck, but I don't see the problem.
CRITIQUE: That pose looks pretty uncomfortable, but I'm guilty of that too, and the head seems a bit too wide for the body.
I like it, though. You're definitely improving.

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PostSubject: Re: nope   Fri Nov 18, 2011 4:48 pm

@Timgear: LOLDATPICTURE.

@CowCow: The neck isn't very large. I disagree with you and agree with Timegear.

@Loke: Augh so good. ;w;
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:17 am

OH GODS where did you learn to draw like that?

That's so AWESOME!
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:10 am

Ok soo
only 1 mistake yu have is tht you only drew one eye
9.9/10.
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 8:59 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Ok soo
only 1 mistake yu have is tht you only drew one eye
9.9/10.


Even for a sketch/doodle, it looks really nice. ^^

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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:17 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Ok soo
only 1 mistake yu have is tht you only drew one eye
9.9/10.
Hair is covering other eye,

Love it all 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:23 am

Perfect. You're better at anatomy than me ;w;

The only thing that I would change is the hair sectioned on the far side, even though it's a sketch. It looks a bit awkward and makes the top of her head look a bit large or not formed properly.

Again, that's just my opinion. You mightn't see it the way I do, which is fine ^-^
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 9:25 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Ok soo
only 1 mistake yu have is tht you only drew one eye
9.9/10.
Uh, sweety, that's because she has side bangs.
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 10:04 am

**cutey_larl** wrote:
Ok soo
only 1 mistake yu have is tht you only drew one eye
9.9/10.

Is that necessary, docking .1 point just for a tiny little mistake, because I see nothing wrong with the eye (because of her bangs) or the neck.

I Like it
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PostSubject: Re: nope   Sat Nov 19, 2011 11:53 am

It's nice, your anatomy is improving.

The only thing is that I would suggest varying your hairstyles a bit, a lot of them seem to look the same.
(I am incredibly guilty of this BUT W/E)
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