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 The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]

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What did you think of the drawing?
Its amazing!
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Its not to bad.
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I like it!
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It could be better...
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I don't really like it.
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It. is. bad.
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Lilypad98
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PostSubject: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:22 am

i listened to your tips and comments, and i updated a little of the eyes and i made less whiskers, and made them a tad shorter along with the coloring. i hope its a little better.

Note: she [the cat this is based off of, which is my grandma's cat] is a long furred, im sorry if you can not see the neck. the neck is underneath the chin, as you can see little of the gray under it. and its head /face is also the light grey lined fur, the lighter color light grey/white is the long fured color, im not good with detailed fur yet to bare with me. Wink




Comment what you think about it, and maybe add some other tips for would could be different!

Thank you for your support and great feedback! cat


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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:33 am

The face is great! The whiskers are little dark though.
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:34 am

It's messy. And I dont think any animal has that many whiskers o__o

i really like it though.
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:29 am

I love the way you drew the cat's body/head, it looks really clean and the eyes are aweshum C:
The only things I would fix are the pupils because they look kinda funky and uneven, and the whiskers. Everything is so clean and then the whiskers are really big and dark (And I agree with A, there's too many). Other than those, I love it!! Great work Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 10:40 am

I ditto Ari.

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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:16 pm

It has lots of whiskers..:PP But its good.
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:21 pm

thank you for the tips everyone! Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:25 pm

It's real nice but
~Though cats have that many whisker they aren't all that long.
~The whiskers are really dark, they should be closer to gray or white

other than that well done ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:29 pm

I really like this cat! I've seen cats that have different colored eyes like that. It's really cool.
The coloring in this is very realistic. I really like how you shaded the nose, which is one of the reasons it looks realistic.
But cats' whiskers should be white, and less whiskers. The ears, eyes, coloring, and shading is pretty cool though! ^^
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 4:31 pm

It's great but the whiskers are too dark and there's too much whiskers. But overall is great 9.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:06 pm

- 3 whiskers on each side was enough. I think it's been mentioned enough.
- His neck. Either he has none of it or it's really small. I can't make out where the head ends?

It's better than what I can draw though. 7.6/10
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:10 pm

I would say the neck is too wide, and I agree with melody and toast. The whiskers are too dark. 7.5/10
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Fri Nov 25, 2011 5:28 pm

To much whiskers, the eyes are uneven as well to.

7/10
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:47 am

yep. i think the whiskers need a make over. and its a she-long haired, sorry, i should work on that. X3

thanks for all your helpful feed back! i think ill get to working on the whiskers now and update it! Smile
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 5:57 am

It's nice! Really cayute~
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 6:15 am

thank you Aubrey Smile

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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:05 am

Yo..
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:24 am

Lilypad,its boring.Omg im kidding is AMAZING! Altough there are too many whiskers but.. nice!
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 9:54 am

10/10 the ears look funny but in a good way Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: The family cat i draw on the computer* [UPDATED]   Sat Nov 26, 2011 10:12 am

Thank you. =D
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