Faye Tande ( personal character rate 1-10 )

hey so i havnt posted art in a while....so I here by present miss faye tande..shes a character of mine........ waring her outfit shows her tomach and thats it....im pretty sure all of u have seen a stomach before dont go making a big deal out of it...please rate 1-10 and enjoy

OPTINAL...read about her..picture it and then tell me if you imagined her as is..
info about her

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Her picutre

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Good, but she's kinda too skinny or is she suppose to be like that? xD

So I will give it a 9.9/10

Awesome, but I would suggest you make your character's...melons (lol?) a bit loose rather than having them stick up. Also, she looks a bit too skinny, make her legs, arms, and waist thicker, and the neck thinner.

Mr.Taost wrote:

Awesome, but I would suggest you make your character's...melons (lol?) a bit loose rather than having them stick up. Also, she looks a bit too skinny, make her legs, arms, and waist thicker, and the neck thinner.

okay

To me everything but the neck and torso looks fine, because the neck is sort of shaped like this:
/ \ in the drawing, and it should be more even.
the torso is looking REALLY skinny, like she has no ribs D:
but the arms and legs seem fine...

9/10

That's really awesome! Her outfit is really interesting, that's something I have a hard time with, lol. The only thing that looked strange to me was the mouth, the line art should have been either erased entirely or completed.