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PostSubject: The Tunnel of the never ending darkness   The Tunnel of the never ending darkness Icon_minitimeSun Dec 25, 2011 7:35 pm

Here is my story for the writing contest, it may be creepy but yeah. Sorry if there is wrong grammar.

Yet enjoy! ^^

Also please tell me what you think of it!

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EDIT: I was actually scared-ish out when writing this.
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PostSubject: Re: The Tunnel of the never ending darkness   The Tunnel of the never ending darkness Icon_minitimeWed Dec 28, 2011 11:10 am

It's good, but you should seperate it into paragraphs. Whenenver a different character it talking, make a line break.
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PostSubject: Re: The Tunnel of the never ending darkness   The Tunnel of the never ending darkness Icon_minitimeWed Dec 28, 2011 2:41 pm

I know, but I got to lazy to do that. xD
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