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PostSubject: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 3:35 pm

Please tell me on things I could improve on. (IN A NICE WAY PLEASE !) I know it's not very good. Ok here it is.

My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) Fantag16

EDIT: If you say I could improve at shading I'm not good at it... So yeah just stating a fact

Another edit xP: It's my first one too (I used paint)
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 3:37 pm

your a little shaky in your drawing. i am always is shaky (because i have a laptop). So do you have laptop or computer?


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Computer xP. Ikr it's tricky
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptySun Mar 18, 2012 4:47 pm

I love it! I dont think you should change anything!
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Ty!!! Smile
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maybe just add sum accesories to complete da outfit. But daffs all Very Happy <33 ing da paint qurl
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Ty xDD lol it took me a whole day :3
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kewlio
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyMon Mar 19, 2012 1:49 am

That's awesome I really like it
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyMon Mar 19, 2012 2:27 am

mine is alot worser than yours, lol.
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyMon Mar 19, 2012 3:15 am

Dat's a nice drawing. c: 10/10.
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Thnx guys!
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 11:22 am

its good. I could never do that on a computer it would be really messy!
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 12:31 pm

did you use the curve tool?? if you did it would be wayyyyyy cleaner! its actually really good.

but the shirt needs a BIT more shading. And you don't need to fill it in much:)

EDIT: where did you get the template??
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 2:02 pm

The drawing is really pretty, I like your shading. my only suggestion is adding a nose, and maybe some colour to the eyes.
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 2:32 pm

I Like It. Maybe Color For The Eyes, But Everything Else Is Good.
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ITS not bad! ITS nice!!! Smile
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santa REALLY it is -_-
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyTue Mar 20, 2012 10:00 pm

Misty Life wrote:
EDIT: where did you get the template??
In the Fanart section of the "Comet" (you know, Fantage's weekly newsletter) go to the submission tab. Find the instructions, and you should be able to click a button to download it.

If you don't understand, click this (sorry the images are large):
 

To print it out (if you are going to be hand-drawing the clothing and hair), just open the file in MS paint or any simple paint program and click the print button.
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 12:43 am

I like the way you have shaded the character but:
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8/10, hope that helped c:
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no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
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PostSubject: Re: My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart)   My fail fantage drawing xP (for fanart) EmptyWed Mar 21, 2012 5:39 am

FantageParis wrote:
no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
You know how rude that really sounds? Could you do any better?


Anyway. I like the hair you drew but its a little rough, and not a lot of shading.
8.3/10 nice job though. :3
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FantageParis wrote:
no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad

GOD!! We have little kids on this forum! Fantagelovezz, you just created this account to break rules, didn't you?
Also, didn't she say to critique in a nice way?
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FantageParis wrote:
no that just sucks like shit and what the fuck thats so so bad
Just stfu you lil bish im sure you can do worser than that oh and stfu stop trying to get attention you liar rulebreaker you 三八
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