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Abstract
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| Subject: A Lament with a picture  Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:44 pm | |
| Hi guys! I haven't put up a picture in a while. I currently made two. The one I will be showing you is a lament (WITH a picture). I haven't colored it in yet, but I am waiting on ratings for it. Here is the poem in the who picture: - Spoiler:
My life has been but in joy and
Happiness
Made fun of, let that aside
Got sick much, I'm fine
Not a huge place; not a lot of
Clothes, I'm still alive
But something that gets me
What I see all the time
Is an animal sitting alone
A child without a family
An unfortunate vagabond who has
No where to go
Blood shed one side (the picture)
Blood shed thee other (another picture)
But guess what, those people
Who live marvelously
Are mostly who might not care.
I'm not saying all, only a few
But seeing somethings like that
Should be fixed.
Now here is the picture: - Spoiler:
Oh and those lines on the arms, under them will be where it will be shaded, the lighting is coming from above the arms.
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Golden-Star
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 14, 2012 4:48 pm | |
| cool c. I love it; it looks realistic 10/10 | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:08 pm | |
| Thank youuu. Any other rates or critiques? | |
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~Kitty~x3
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Thu Mar 15, 2012 6:51 pm | |
| 10/10 its neat and has details ^.^ Its awesome!  | |
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Flynn
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Fri Mar 16, 2012 5:28 am | |
| 7/10.
I like the way you did the hands, but on the picture, the poem is almost impossible to read, and what exactly are the large shapes in the back supposed to be? | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Fri Mar 16, 2012 6:54 am | |
| Lol the picture is bigger in real life, you'd see it better there instead of from this printer.
And the shapes.... well I still have to color it, they are just designs. (For now lol).
And right now I'm just focusing if I can shade this well. | |
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Blue
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Fri Mar 16, 2012 7:32 am | |
| I like your handwriting, it's like a scrawl but I feel the fingers are a bit short and as Yuffie said, the writing's almost impossible to read. 8.5/10. | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Fri Mar 16, 2012 7:40 am | |
| Lol which is why I put the poem up there. Cx But thank you overall. I think they are more pointy than short.... ehh I will fix them. | |
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vineland1234
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:00 pm | |
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vineland1234
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:01 pm | |
|  really looks cool. | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:29 pm | |
| Lol thank you. C: I have a bunch more drawings I have made, but I probably won't put them up today. | |
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x♥XrachX♥x
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:50 pm | |
| nice! wow, i must suck at drawing | |
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Abstract
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| | Subject: Re: A Lament with a picture Wed Mar 21, 2012 6:54 pm | |
| Ty. I'm sure you don't though. You can try posting some on the forum so people can critique it and help you make it it better. C: | |
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