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Melissa H.
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| Subject: drawing >U<  Tue Apr 10, 2012 2:35 pm | |
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Alyssa:)
Senior Fantagian
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Age : 25
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:27 pm | |
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Usui
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Join date : 2011-09-09
Age : 24
Location : Worldbuscus
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 3:40 pm | |
| Her legs look rather odd.
Her neck is too small, yet her Head is a bit too big.
But, It's really cute, I like it a lot. I would rate this 8.1/10 :] | |
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Misty Life
Regular Fantagian
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| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:09 pm | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
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Age : 22
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| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 5:56 pm | |
| ok here::::::: https://2img.net/h/oi43.tinypic.com/wiuha9.jpg | |
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Misty Life
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| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 6:10 pm | |
| Is it a chibi? It looks so cute! Don't mind the feet and hands if its a chibi. Just fix some body parts like the legs.
8.9/10!! | |
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
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Age : 21
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| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:27 pm | |
| 9/10. the head is alittle to big | |
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Misty Life
Regular Fantagian
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Age : 20
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| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:28 pm | |
| - disney4ever wrote:
- 9/10. the head is alittle to big
I think its a chibi | |
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castiel
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Join date : 2011-11-15
Age : 23
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:50 pm | |
|  Okay, heres my explanation for my critique. 1) I think it was a little abnormal for the arms to be larger than the torso. 2) You don't have to work on this, since its probably your style but I think you should add more of a curve to the head. 3) I fixed the legs for you, since the left one seemed like a painful position for me. 4) I tried to fix the width of the arms and made the torso a little more accurate. 5) This doesn't really matter, but I tried to extend the stick things on the sunglasses (sticks.. xD). Overall I really like this. Especially the speech bubble with the heart c:. | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
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Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:53 am | |
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Flynn
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Age : 25
Location : The gallows
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:10 am | |
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PRAISE:
1.The speech bubble was a clever touch.
2.The way you did her bangs was cute.
CRITIQUE:
1. The head is much too large, even for a chibi.
2. The zigzags in the eyes are a little disturbing.
3. Her arms are bigger than her middle.
4. Her leg isn't kicking back, it's bending sideways.
5. is the thing in near the back of her head hair or something else?
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Melissa H.
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Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: drawing >U< Wed Apr 11, 2012 11:14 am | |
| its hair in a bun
and yeaa i knooooo TT^TT | |
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