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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| Subject: my new masterpiece!!!  Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:07 pm | |
|  named her Kinzie even tho she dont really look like Kinzie from NCIS LA. please critique | |
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taptap489
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 212
Join date : 2011-07-29
Age : 25
Location : In La La Land ^_^
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:12 pm | |
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Flynn
Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 12278
Join date : 2012-01-14
Age : 25
Location : The gallows
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:15 pm | |
| http://www.fantageforum.com/t9023-drawing-u
It's the same drawing.
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:16 pm | |
| long story short:
i started this at my dads
then i went to my moms
got bored
tryed drawing it w/ different clothes
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Squirtle
Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8791
Join date : 2011-12-04
Age : 21
Location : Somewhere
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 3:50 pm | |
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Monsterbunny
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1425
Join date : 2010-12-11
Age : 24
Location : Behind you
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:28 pm | |
| 5/10
Her head is very big and angle-like | |
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Mila
Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2017
Join date : 2011-09-01
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:48 pm | |
| 8.5/10 i love the shading in the eyes. Your improving!
EDIT: i made it 8. i clicked 7 on accident
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:52 pm | |
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Alyssa:)
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 404
Join date : 2011-09-01
Age : 25
Location : United States
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 4:56 pm | |
| 8.5/10 Yor improving,Marci! Great!  | |
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Abstract
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4563
Join date : 2010-07-14
Age : 24
Location : (╯°□°)╯︵ ┻━┻ Somewhere flipping tables
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Wed Apr 11, 2012 5:17 pm | |
| 7.6/10
It's cute. C: I think you should start working on head shape though. It looks like of wide at the top and small at the bottom. But overall, the body is so nice! C: | |
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Pieee
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 313
Join date : 2011-12-10
Location : drowning
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Thu Apr 12, 2012 3:30 am | |
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Usui
Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5275
Join date : 2011-09-09
Age : 24
Location : Worldbuscus
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Thu Apr 12, 2012 6:28 am | |
| Her head is a bit too big, and she also has a really skinny body, but you are definitely improving.
Keep up the good work I would rate this. 8.1/10 c: | |
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rukia kuchiki
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 226
Join date : 2011-08-08
Age : 25
Location : inuyasha forest/im akane witchme
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Thu Apr 12, 2012 7:43 am | |
| 7.9/10 its good but the heads to big and the body skinny,this is coming from a person who enter contests you should draw more traditional art aka draw on a piece of paper. | |
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Melissa H.
Dedicated Fantagian
Posts : 1447
Join date : 2011-10-26
Age : 22
Location : Oh i live somewhere over the rainbow
| | Subject: Re: my new masterpiece!!! Thu Apr 12, 2012 1:22 pm | |
| i draw on paper all the time i just dont feel like uploading it... and yes i know the head it to big. i get it  | |
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