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Burittanie
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PostSubject: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:16 pm

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I don't know what to title it hahah, I'll come up with something eventually though.
Made with 17 layers
I feel like I'm missing something, but I have no idea. If you see something unfinished please tell me x_x
Critique please c: redline if you want as well!~
Oh here's the sketch:
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:27 pm

omg amazing! i love everything including the shading! 10/10. there needs to be more shading on the pants and right arm though.


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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 8:47 pm

9.9/10 I loooooove it! But I agree though, there is something missing, I felt that vibe. ;_; Her left arm doesn't see to have enough shading I guess? I don't know, I still like it!
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 10:48 pm

I know you said on my screen-share that you can't draw bushes, but these bushes turned out really nice! Though I gotta say, it is way easier to paint bushes/trees with watercolors on a piece of paper than it is on SAI. SAI doesn't give you the effect of the bristles on a paintbrush, and without that bristle effect, the bush/tree won't look as good. However, there's nothing wrong with you using SAI to draw these bushes, since your main focus in this drawing was the person, not the bushes.

Aaanyways, I suggest you make the shadow under her shoes sharper, since it looks too blurred. She appears to be somewhat floating. You don't have to make the whole shadow sharper, just the area underneath her shoes.

And maybe that thing you're missing is shading on the hands? That would add a lot more "definition", should I say, to the drawing.

Other than that, this is a //gorgeous// piece of art, and I look forward to seeing more of your drawings!
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:34 pm

you drew this?
wow
no offence i said that as a good thing but u cant hear me cuz its a computer
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Sun Jun 17, 2012 11:40 pm

Wow this is fabulous! I especially love the background nwn

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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Mon Jun 18, 2012 1:00 am

Wow this is amazing the bushes are so pretty
10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:28 am

Perfect. Everyone is so good at drawing here.
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Mon Jun 18, 2012 6:30 am

That is really amazing. You're really good at drawing. :3
I would rate this 10/10
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Fri Jun 22, 2012 9:20 pm

Thanks you guys! Really appreciate the feedback (:
I edited the shading on both the arms, the shading on her feet, and the shading on the shorts. Should I make it darker or is it fine? Or is there anything else to fix? Again, thanks for the feedback!
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PostSubject: Re: Spring Vibe?   Fri Jun 22, 2012 10:16 pm

Burittanie wrote:
Thanks you guys! Really appreciate the feedback (:
I edited the shading on both the arms, the shading on her feet, and the shading on the shorts. Should I make it darker or is it fine? Or is there anything else to fix? Again, thanks for the feedback!

It looks much better now that you have edited your shading! (not that it wasn't good before)
I would rate it 10/10!
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