elise
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| Hey im writing a new story (: i hope you like it.. [btw the title is pronouced, m-iz-u-ky-ia.] Chapter one  - Spoiler:
"Mizukiya the day I see you going outside in the fog like that ever again, your grounded! I was almost handing out pictures to people!" Mizukiya's Mother, Josalina said.
"Don't worry mom it's alright..Trust me okay?" Mizukiya said. For short its Mizu. Mizukiya walked into her room, half slamming her door. Mizukiya sighs and gets on her laptop, she checks to see if her friend Lila is on. She always leaves it open, Mizukiya isn't sure why, she types "Hi Lila, you on? If u r type back, ty!" After a few seconds or so Lila answers with this response, "Sorry Miz I can't talk to u 2day, my mom is dragging me to a birthday party for her friends, ttyl bff!<3 hugs" Mizukiya sighs and gets on the Internet, she types in, "Games4u!.com" She looks at all the wonderful games, she even made one herself, after months and months, Mizu sended her game to the people, she prays that she got in the game, so she can finally start earing money again, she types in the Search Bar, "Hypro Puzzle Boom." "Ugh what a stupid title I did" Mizukiya says to herself. She takes a deep breath and click SEARCH! After, she starts screaming, not for joy. For something else.
nighty night folks, ill be gettin ready 4 bed soon at 2:00 or 1:00 , story of the day, i might post the next chapter 2morrow if i remember.  by the way sorry its so short | |
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Wizzy
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| | Subject: Re: Mizukiya [STORY.] Thu Aug 09, 2012 11:44 pm | |
| It's good Just when you say the numbers like 2day and u r don't go in much stories but still its good 10/10! | |
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