Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 3:49 pm
Its called 'The Reality'. I started doing it yesterday/the day before yesterday and its finished! Hope you like it! (This is the first episode. I uploaded it earlier today.)
emiko Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3968 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 110 Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 3:59 pm
THEY NEED MORE EMOTIONS XD Not smiling for the whole time!
Awesome!
6/10 If only the text moved faster and stuff :p
Can i be a star in it?
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:01 pm
☆Marshy ★ wrote:
THEY NEED MORE EMOTIONS XD Not smiling for the whole time!
Awesome!
6/10 If only the text moved faster and stuff :p
Can i be a star in it?
Um, no sorry you can't. I'm all the girls. I do need help with the boy characters, if you have one. Ya, and about the text.. Its slow.. I know. Any suggestions about the music? I suck at finding BGM. Thanks for the rating! I'll try to improve.
emiko Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 3968 Join date : 2012-06-17 Age : 110 Location : london is in jupiter... right? QwQ
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:02 pm
Hm..... mabye something smooth like "Im comin home". I like that song.
Reese Hero Fantagian
Posts : 6320 Join date : 2012-11-12 Age : 25
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:03 pm
I agree with Marshy. The text was sort of slow... but the story was good :3 6.5/10
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:04 pm
☆Marshy ★ wrote:
Hm..... mabye something smooth like "Im comin home". I like that song.
Oh ya, thanks! I just downloaded the instrumental.
Harry Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 7654 Join date : 2012-07-16 Age : 25 Location : with you ;)
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:07 pm
It's nice, but the people move rather slowly. Maybe you should speed it up a bit. And the font is slow and kind of hard to read. Maybe do a simple text. Finally, you should add some emotions to their faces to make it look more dramatic. But this is really good 8/10
Snow Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487 Join date : 2012-08-21 Age : 22 Location : Forever young
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:58 pm
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 4:59 pm
snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)
Thanks! Is he a member?
Snow Legendary Fantagian
Posts : 11487 Join date : 2012-08-21 Age : 22 Location : Forever young
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:00 pm
Lin wrote:
snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)
Thanks! Is he a member?
no, but he has member clothes and a bunch of ecoins.
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sat Dec 29, 2012 5:07 pm
snowflake wrote:
Lin wrote:
snowflake wrote:
Cool series! If you need a boy character, You can use my brother's. ( He always wanted to be in a fantage series)
Thanks! Is he a member?
no, but he has member clothes and a bunch of ecoins.
Thanks so much! Can you PM me the username and password please? Thanks.
evan Hero Fantagian
Posts : 5295 Join date : 2012-11-03 Age : 22 Location : upstate baby
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:04 pm
Hey your video was amazing! I could never make that!
Guest Guest
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Sun Dec 30, 2012 11:51 pm
I think it's cute. I think you should pull of more Fantage edits to make this more unique I don't like the concept though it's kinda like Cast a Spell, and not all that original. You should try using those great ideas you use for RPs. But nice job.
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Wed Jan 02, 2013 9:47 am
Clockwork Invention wrote:
I think it's cute. I think you should pull of more Fantage edits to make this more unique I don't like the concept though it's kinda like Cast a Spell, and not all that original. You should try using those great ideas you use for RPs. But nice job.
It is original. If you want I can PM you the whole storyline but it would spoil it for you.
o Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4270 Join date : 2011-11-11 Age : 23
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Wed Jan 02, 2013 12:33 pm
the animation is nice, and the story is pretty interesting!!
Sakuya Izayoi Regular Fantagian
Posts : 169 Join date : 2012-10-03 Age : 24
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:38 pm
If you want another prem account on the series I can give you mine to use.
Primrose Ultimate Fantagian
Posts : 8311 Join date : 2011-08-27 Age : 21 Location : District 12
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:39 pm
Pudding wrote:
If you want another prem account on the series I can give you mine to use.
If its a boy, yes. Not if its a girl because all the girls are me. Thanks, by the way!
Mr.Noah Expert Fantagian
Posts : 2629 Join date : 2012-06-27 Age : 27 Location : New York
Subject: Re: A series I created.. [PLEASE WATCH!!!] Wed Jan 02, 2013 2:49 pm
This really reminds me of Cast A Spell....I don't know but it does...Maybe,use the storylines from your RP's because then someone will probably comment saying you copied and start drama.
But its nice
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