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PostSubject: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 4:48 pm

The drawing (LONG/WIDE, ZOOM OUT TO SEE CLEARLY):

I used to use Servimg, but now it's being all glitchy with me. But at least Tinypic wasn't being mean to me! Very Happy

Anyway, critique if you want, but I prefer ratings.

I'm working on anatomy more now, so if you have any suggestions for what poses I should, try, contact me! c:

And originally, this was supposed to end up scary, but I ended up using some colorful designs~

OH AND this was done at school, so those legs and what not make looks pretty iffy.
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 5:06 pm

I give this a 9/10! Her hands look like claws. But I think this was a great drawing.
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 5:07 pm

Twilight wrote:
I give this a 9/10! Her hands look like claws. But I think this was a great drawing.
That's literally exactly what I was thinking.
Her hands, the fingers are so pointy and sharp...
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 5:11 pm

Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Twilight wrote:
I give this a 9/10! Her hands look like claws. But I think this was a great drawing.
That's literally exactly what I was thinking.
Her hands, the fingers are so pointy and sharp...

Ah, it's a style I do (that I need to work on stopping unless if the photo actually intentionally look horrific.). I usually have drawn my fingers very sharp. (Too lazy to show an example ah. xc)

But thank you for the point outs guys. Wink
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 5:16 pm

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Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Twilight wrote:
I give this a 9/10! Her hands look like claws. But I think this was a great drawing.
That's literally exactly what I was thinking.
Her hands, the fingers are so pointy and sharp...

Ah, it's a style I do (that I need to work on stopping unless if the photo actually intentionally look horrific.). I usually have drawn my fingers very sharp. (Too lazy to show an example ah. xc)

But thank you for the point outs guys. Wink
Haha it didn't look horrific. xD
I mean its nothing major. If that's your style, that's fine and you don't need to stop. Everyone draws differently. c:
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Insanity. ♥ wrote:
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Insanity. ♥ wrote:
Twilight wrote:
I give this a 9/10! Her hands look like claws. But I think this was a great drawing.
That's literally exactly what I was thinking.
Her hands, the fingers are so pointy and sharp...

Ah, it's a style I do (that I need to work on stopping unless if the photo actually intentionally look horrific.). I usually have drawn my fingers very sharp. (Too lazy to show an example ah. xc)

But thank you for the point outs guys. Wink
Haha it didn't look horrific. xD
I mean its nothing major. If that's your style, that's fine and you don't need to stop. Everyone draws differently. c:

I think the colors make it less horrific, I need to practice on doing those though~

And haha yeah, I don't like it when people hate their style. :K~ But it's always good to break out of your style once in a while
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i actually do recommend changing the fingers, it doesn't fit in with the rest of your style.
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Oliver wrote:
i actually do recommend changing the fingers, it doesn't fit in with the rest of your style.

I'll see what I can do in my next drawings.
I must remember that fingers and nails aren't the same thing, ahh. xD
Thanks for your point of view by the way.
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PostSubject: Re: New drawing (Servimg hates me now)   New drawing (Servimg hates me now) Icon_minitimeTue Feb 26, 2013 6:12 pm

Everything is cute besides the hands. You should make them a bit more round and less sharp.

Otherwise good job! 9.5/10
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You did a very good job with your drawing, but the fingers look sort of claw-like.
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That is really good since you were trying to go for a more scary look your hands actually look good with it personally I like the hands as they are I say there is nothing that could make it better 10/10
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(I just realized to say that those are gloves and not hands. xD)
Anyway, sorry I couldn't respond earlier, been busy.
Thank you for the comments/compliments/eye-witnessing parts of my sculpture. Razz
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It is really good! The only thing that bugs me is the skin for some reason? Good job!
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