[Insert Identity Here] = A Story

Moderator Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24

Nakira wrote:: I'm putting up Chapter 10 today. 8D

YAYAYAYAYA.
I read this yesterday too. Lol.

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:40 pm

Nakira wrote:: I'm putting up Chapter 10 today. 8D

YAY i been waiting forever xDD

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Oct 09, 2010 9:50 pm

WOOT!THAT RULES!!!!I COULDN'T WAIT!HOORAY!!!HOORAY!!!

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:02 pm

I just posted it. :3

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:03 pm

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!YAYAYAYAYAYAYAY~!~

Moderator Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24

OOOOO I WANT MOARMOARMOAR.

kekekeke. xDD

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:15 pm

lol tiny.LOL I WANNA SAYTHAT NOW!!!!O.o YOU TOOK MEH WORDS!

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sun Oct 10, 2010 4:54 am

you only post new chapteers when we remind you.. BE AUTOMATIC ALREADY XD

anyways YAY! finally annother chapter and for the next one you better not keep me waiting missy

Subject: Whee! Mon Oct 11, 2010 7:16 am

What how?

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Mon Oct 11, 2010 11:13 am

it was a very enjoyable story which i thought had a good basis to it

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Mon Oct 11, 2010 4:45 pm

Aliens wrote:: What how?

Do you have a question? C: I can answer it~

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Tue Oct 12, 2010 5:42 pm

what i like about it is how real fantagians are torn like that in the real fantage where members rule and some people support it although i renew my membership to get the perks i don't like snobby members most of them are snobs like i saw them say NONS STINK! stuff like that and do u know what it is racists it is down right racists and that is what your story focuses on which makes the truth about it so real and useful and i just love your format truly inspiring

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Tue Oct 12, 2010 6:28 pm

Thank you. You know, for someone so young, your writing's good.

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Nakira wrote:: Thank you. You know, for someone so young, your writing's good.

NEW CHAPTER, NEW CHAPTER!

...Please? xD

8DDD

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:15 pm

Nakira wrote:: Thank you. You know, for someone so young, your writing's good.

what is that supposed to mean?

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:22 pm

I think that was a compliment, stating that you write well for a 10-year-old. Nakira's 14, so... (I'm excactly in the middle! Yeah! Except I won't be in a week and three days!)

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Thu Oct 14, 2010 9:26 pm

good for you i turn 11 in 4 months and 4 days but i was just kidding about it like as a joke and i did indeed take it as a compliment!

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Fri Nov 26, 2010 2:45 pm

New chapter! This one's dedicated to Makkine, as an uber late birthday gift and for supporting the story. XD

Moderator Posts : 9590 Join date : 2010-02-07 Age : 24

EPICNESS!
Now I get the story title. Lol.
Amazing.
I can't wait for more!

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Nov 27, 2010 1:03 pm

JPAKÑñlALKALKNALJKEU3OIHR°!||KJKA KEYBOARD SMASH AFDJOACHNBHDKG2°°°!!!!
OMG NEW CHAPTER MUST READ. WILL WRITE SOMETHING COHERENT ONCE FINGER CAN GET OFF SHIFT KEY. AJBRKJFKWY

EDIT: I think, that has been the best chapter you have written so far. Your descriptions of everything are rich and detailed, but never intrusive, and they add to the subtle horror of the scene (This is something even adult writers have difficulty pulling off, and I think you did a great job with it). I love how well you can create a dystopian society that somehow makes sense, and how the characters simply accept it in the same way we can, at times, accépt the most injust and horrific aspects of modern life without a second glance.

Bravo, Nakira, you have created a world that is realistic, horrifying, and interesting at the same time, and I am left wanting for more.

This chapter's dedicated for me?! May I get back to keyboard smashing?

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Nov 27, 2010 4:41 pm

One word.
FREAKINGMOSTEPICTHINGINTHEWHOLEENTIREWORDYOUSHOULDBEANAUTHORWHENYOUGROWUP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

*Cough* Ahem. I lost my self for a moment there. Embarassed

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But seriously, you should be an author when you grow up. If you write this good now, it'll be hard to believe you would get better when you grow more, because this, OH THIS, THISTHISTHIS...
.
Is amazing.

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Sat Nov 27, 2010 5:05 pm

I WANT MOREE, THIS IS THE MOST FREAKINGEPICSTORYIEVERREAD

Now i need to calm down, but seriously this is the most epic thing I ever read, i want more xD

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:05 am

Wow, I just read all the current chapters, and since I agree with everyone else, I'll say that it's amazing.

Really, you should become an author when you grow up! You have potential.
Who knows, maybe your eventual works will get discovered and eventually get really popular? Wink

And I could definitely see this being made into a Fantage movie to be hosted on Youtube, taking place in Fantage and all. We'll just need people who wants to do it.

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Mon Nov 29, 2010 10:26 am

OMGYOURSTORYISSOAMAZINGMAKEMORECHAPTERS!!!!!

I'm serious your story is great. Please write another chapter PLZZZZ

Subject: Re: [Insert Identity Here] = A Story Tue Nov 30, 2010 4:30 pm

So THATS why its called insert identity here... Razz

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