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 Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)

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elise
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PostSubject: Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)   Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story) EmptyThu Aug 22, 2013 6:06 pm

hope you enjoy it (x !

Chapter 1, Why?.:
 
i'm so sorry about the very short chapter, this was kind of an introduction (: critiques are accepted, thanks for reading Like a Star @ heaven

Chapter 1, Part 2:
 

this story is so stupid why are you guys reading it? ^^ ⭐thanks for reading! these are pretty short though..


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Blueberry
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PostSubject: Re: Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)   Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story) EmptyThu Aug 22, 2013 6:37 pm

"Claire was a ordinary rich girl, had one wonderful life, only her and her mom, perfect, right?"
I think for the underlined part, ya have to use "an" instead of "a" cuz the next letter after "a" is the "o" from "ordinary" and "o" is a vowel so you have to use "an."
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PostSubject: Re: Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)   Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story) EmptySat Aug 24, 2013 1:03 pm

I like it, carry on. Smile
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PostSubject: Re: Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)   Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story) EmptySat Sep 07, 2013 3:36 pm

It's really good you should post this on Wattpad or something.
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PostSubject: Re: Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story)   Ab-so-lutley Positively Perfect! (Story) EmptySat Sep 07, 2013 3:52 pm

There are some issues with your punctuation usage, but otherwise it's nice c:
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Yea I agree but it's still good.
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