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ashsal833
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 292
Join date : 2011-07-04
Location : AZ
| Subject: The Storm  Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:24 am | |
| ( boring i know XD ) I lay awake in my bed i couldnt go to sleep oh why did i watch that movie it was 11:00 at night then BOOM BOOM. I wondered whats that I dont hear rain a gun fight :O? A few minutes later rain patter patter. Before i knew it BAM BAM BAM rain ounded on the window. Lighting lighted up the sky as soon as i was almost slowly drifting to sleep BOOM!!!!!!!!!! lighting staitafter it shook my bed   Then it was a pattern patter BAM BOOM lightning Time went by i went to sleep XD i hope you like it it happned late last night i hope it rains again  | |
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alex
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Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 25
Location : google maps
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:28 am | |
| It was confusing. There weren't any commas, and the story just fell apart. | |
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pat
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:29 am | |
| Where do you live? It was prefect here. | |
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ashsal833
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 292
Join date : 2011-07-04
Location : AZ
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:39 am | |
| @ Ani Sorry ill work on that more o.o
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-♥Sweet19971♥-
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Join date : 2011-05-11
Age : 26
Location : Find me :p
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pat
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 10:42 am | |
| i live in massachusetts so i understand. | |
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Relora
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Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 27
Location : Define "Location"
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:00 am | |
| Living in Florida you understand this.. mainly when hurricanes and tropical storms come | |
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pat
Veteran Fantagian
Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:05 am | |
| my mom grew up in florida :3 | |
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katieeb16
Regular Fantagian
Posts : 216
Join date : 2011-07-18
Location : Vacation House of the Lake
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 11:50 am | |
| Im in Michigan and it poured yesterday.. the lake im on rose a lot.... today is perfect though. its the 3 time it rained this summer, and better than New York weather im used to  | |
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Relora
Hero Fantagian
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Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 27
Location : Define "Location"
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:46 pm | |
| lol I wish i lived in Michigan. | |
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kateyperry221
Senior Fantagian
Posts : 470
Join date : 2011-04-13
Age : 24
Location : Home.
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 12:55 pm | |
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Blackrose
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Join date : 2010-07-20
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 2:11 pm | |
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sahilin
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Posts : 356
Join date : 2010-11-01
Location : Good Question.
| | Subject: Re: The Storm Wed Aug 03, 2011 2:46 pm | |
| Sounds scary but at least you got to sleep! I love sleeping in the rain( ONLY when it's raining no lighting no thundering NO NOTHING but the SOUND OF THE RAIN.) | |
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