Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.
Fantage Forum
Welcome to the Fantage Forum.


Fantage Cheats, Secrets, Glitches, Info & Help.
 
HomeSearchRegisterLog in


 

 The Storm

Go down 
+5
Relora
-♥Sweet19971♥-
pat
alex
ashsal833
9 posters
AuthorMessage
ashsal833
Senior Fantagian
ashsal833


Posts : 292
Join date : 2011-07-04
Location : AZ

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:24 am

( boring i know XD )

I lay awake in my bed i couldnt go to sleep oh why did i watch that movie it was 11:00 at night then BOOM BOOM. I wondered whats that I dont hear rain a gun fight :O? A few minutes later rain patter patter. Before i knew it BAM BAM BAM rain ounded on the window. Lighting lighted up the sky as soon as i was almost slowly drifting to sleep BOOM!!!!!!!!!! lighting staitafter it shook my bed Surprised affraid Then it was a pattern patter BAM BOOM lightning Time went by i went to sleep



XD i hope you like it it happned late last night i hope it rains again Very Happy
Back to top Go down
alex
Moderator
Moderator
alex


Posts : 23507
Join date : 2010-08-10
Age : 24
Location : google maps

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:28 am

It was confusing. There weren't any commas, and the story just fell apart.
Back to top Go down
pat
Veteran Fantagian
pat


Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:29 am

Where do you live? It was prefect here.
Back to top Go down
https://http:/youtube.com/c/storster/
ashsal833
Senior Fantagian
ashsal833


Posts : 292
Join date : 2011-07-04
Location : AZ

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:39 am

@ Ani Sorry ill work on that more o.o



@sammy arizona
Back to top Go down
-♥Sweet19971♥-
Expert Fantagian
-♥Sweet19971♥-


Posts : 2042
Join date : 2011-05-11
Age : 26
Location : Find me :p

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:40 am

Yea It's Really Was Perfect

Co0oL Very Happy
Back to top Go down
http://www.fantageforum.forumarabia.com
pat
Veteran Fantagian
pat


Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 10:42 am

i live in massachusetts so i understand.
Back to top Go down
https://http:/youtube.com/c/storster/
Relora
Hero Fantagian



Posts : 6776
Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 26
Location : Define "Location"

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 11:00 am

Living in Florida you understand this.. mainly when hurricanes and tropical storms come Surprised
Back to top Go down
pat
Veteran Fantagian
pat


Posts : 4245
Join date : 2010-12-29
Age : 22
Location : USA

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 11:05 am

my mom grew up in florida :3
Back to top Go down
https://http:/youtube.com/c/storster/
katieeb16
Regular Fantagian
katieeb16


Posts : 216
Join date : 2011-07-18
Location : Vacation House of the Lake

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 11:50 am

Im in Michigan and it poured yesterday.. the lake im on rose a lot.... today is perfect though. its the 3 time it rained this summer, and better than New York weather im used to Smile
Back to top Go down
Relora
Hero Fantagian



Posts : 6776
Join date : 2010-11-30
Age : 26
Location : Define "Location"

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 12:46 pm

lol I wish i lived in Michigan.
Back to top Go down
kateyperry221
Senior Fantagian
kateyperry221


Posts : 470
Join date : 2011-04-13
Age : 24
Location : Home.

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 12:55 pm

AWESOME!!
Back to top Go down
Blackrose
Hero Fantagian
Blackrose


Posts : 7338
Join date : 2010-07-20

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 2:11 pm

hm i don't live in USA
Back to top Go down
sahilin
Senior Fantagian
sahilin


Posts : 356
Join date : 2010-11-01
Location : Good Question.

The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitimeWed Aug 03, 2011 2:46 pm

Sounds scary but at least you got to sleep! I love sleeping in the rain( ONLY when it's raining no lighting no thundering NO NOTHING but the SOUND OF THE RAIN.) Very Happy
Back to top Go down
Sponsored content





The Storm Empty
PostSubject: Re: The Storm   The Storm Icon_minitime

Back to top Go down
 
The Storm
Back to top 
Page 1 of 1
 Similar topics
-
» Another storm
» Storm poetry
» A thunder storm
» Storm Alfred [11/9/11]
» The Storm - A Christmas story

Permissions in this forum:You cannot reply to topics in this forum
Fantage Forum :: Creations :: Literature-
Jump to: