Chapter 1 First Day Is it really magical?

My name is Amy I have two sisters one litte one and my big sisiter and my mom and dad . It was my first day of school. My mom said '' Lets go Amy! '' she yelled. I got out of bed put my stuff in my bookbag and stuff. I went to school. I had a teacher named Mrs. Twinkle. She said '' Good morning class '' We all said Good morning back. After 4 hours 12.00 i thought its time for lunch. I walked into the lunch room hoping i would see some nice people i sat down next to my sisters i said '' whats going on? '' my big sister ignored me and rolled her eyes my litte sis was too busy playing around she giggled . I walked away to my friends from last year. After school.. I knocked on my door. .... No answer i thought. i deiced to go to my friends house next to mine. I walked inside. my friend was playing the computer when he saw me he smiled and said hi! i said hi back His name was Josh he was my best friend. I asked him if he knew were my parents were. He explained '' there out on a trip i think he'' said in a low voice. He said he had a key because he knew id come here i smiled and blushed i said thank you and walked inside my house i gasped .


To be Countinued....

So far so good. ;]

thank you! :L

Imo the smileys are a bit distracting but I can kind of see how it would work by helping people picture it in their minds, but a good story would already have it a picture set in the reader's mind already.
It's a good start though; what's it about? o:

Sowwie cant tell you you have to wait !

Aww :c
alrighty then lol